Renewal

spring renewal starts
tender shoots warmed by the sun
verdant foliage

wild flowers bloom
pure colours of the rainbow
sweet scents perfume air

birds chirping in trees
insects whirring and buzzing
squirrels scampering







for Carol Brown's "Nature Comes to Life' Haiku contest

Renewal by
Carol Fillmore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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R Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 1:33 AM
congrats on ur 1st place win.
Song Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Applause! ( Take a bow!) Much deserving of this honor. You must be a nature lover to write such detail! Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:24 PM
I see the active spring haiku got top spot. Way to go, carol. A big congratulations!
Roberts Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 8:03 PM
lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
Mehta Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Carol
Poet Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Lively picture of the budding Spring here!Congrats Carol on your well deserved 1st place win----kashinath
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February 28, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Hello Carol, Congratulations on your 1st place win in this wonderful contest...This is wonderful As Always, Shar
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February 28, 2011 at 9:46 AM
It's great to see you at the top, Carol with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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February 28, 2011 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:57 AM
Super congrats Carol on your first place win in Carol's contest with this exquisite entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry luv..
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Congrad's on your triple header winning all of us need spring! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win Carol in my contest. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2011 at 12:44 PM
These are all the things that make us long for spring, Carol. Beautiful writing! Best wishes in Carol Brown's contest. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 1:31 PM
lovely imagery, Light & love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 12:19 PM
thankxx Carol your sweet words of comment are refreshing to my eyes and encouraging to my soul... appreciate with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Magnificent words Carol .. lovely lilting lines to your precious Haiku ..good luck in the contest.. luv the entire scenery presented ...especially the verdant foliage.. awesome luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Lots of spring things happening in this lively haiku, Carol!
Pettit Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:18 PM
I'm so sick of the winter. Reading your nice double haiku made me feel a bit warmer today.
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February 24, 2011 at 5:15 PM
What could be more lovely than what you have described..I think your going to have success with this. BG
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