Renewal

spring renewal starts tender shoots warmed by the sun verdant foliage wild flowers bloom pure colours of the rainbow sweet scents perfume air birds chirping in trees insects whirring and buzzing squirrels scampering for Carol Brown's "Nature Comes to Life' Haiku contest Renewal by Carol Fillmore

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Rushda R

Date: 3/2/2011 1:33:00 AM

congrats on ur 1st place win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/1/2011 8:42:00 PM

Applause! ( Take a bow!) Much deserving of this honor. You must be a nature lover to write such detail! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 8:24:00 PM

I see the active spring haiku got top spot. Way to go, carol. A big congratulations!

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/28/2011 8:03:00 PM

lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/28/2011 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 2/28/2011 10:57:00 AM

Lively picture of the budding Spring here!Congrats Carol on your well deserved 1st place win----kashinath

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:57:00 AM

Hello Carol, Congratulations on your 1st place win in this wonderful contest...This is wonderful As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2011 9:46:00 AM

It's great to see you at the top, Carol with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2011 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 6:57:00 AM

Super congrats Carol on your first place win in Carol's contest with this exquisite entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2011 6:29:00 AM

Congrad's on your triple header winning all of us need spring! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your very deserving win Carol in my contest. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 12:44:00 PM

These are all the things that make us long for spring, Carol. Beautiful writing! Best wishes in Carol Brown's contest. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/26/2011 1:31:00 PM

lovely imagery, Light & love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/26/2011 12:19:00 PM

thankxx Carol your sweet words of comment are refreshing to my eyes and encouraging to my soul... appreciate with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2011 2:10:00 PM

Magnificent words Carol .. lovely lilting lines to your precious Haiku ..good luck in the contest.. luv the entire scenery presented ...especially the verdant foliage.. awesome luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 11:40:00 PM

Lots of spring things happening in this lively haiku, Carol!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/24/2011 5:18:00 PM

I'm so sick of the winter. Reading your nice double haiku made me feel a bit warmer today.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/24/2011 5:15:00 PM

What could be more lovely than what you have described..I think your going to have success with this. BG