Renewal

spring renewal starts
tender shoots warmed by the sun
verdant foliage

wild flowers bloom
pure colours of the rainbow
sweet scents perfume air

birds chirping in trees
insects whirring and buzzing
squirrels scampering







for Carol Brown's "Nature Comes to Life' Haiku contest

Renewal by
Carol Fillmore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/2/2011 1:33:00 AM
congrats on ur 1st place win.
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Date: 3/1/2011 8:42:00 PM
Applause! ( Take a bow!) Much deserving of this honor. You must be a nature lover to write such detail! Gwendolen
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:24:00 PM
I see the active spring haiku got top spot. Way to go, carol. A big congratulations!
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:03:00 PM
lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 2/28/2011 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Carol
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Date: 2/28/2011 10:57:00 AM
Lively picture of the budding Spring here!Congrats Carol on your well deserved 1st place win----kashinath
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:57:00 AM
Hello Carol, Congratulations on your 1st place win in this wonderful contest...This is wonderful As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/28/2011 9:46:00 AM
It's great to see you at the top, Carol with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:57:00 AM
Super congrats Carol on your first place win in Carol's contest with this exquisite entry luv.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch entry luv..
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Date: 2/28/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congrad's on your triple header winning all of us need spring! Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2011 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win Carol in my contest. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 12:44:00 PM
These are all the things that make us long for spring, Carol. Beautiful writing! Best wishes in Carol Brown's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2011 1:31:00 PM
lovely imagery, Light & love
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Date: 2/26/2011 12:19:00 PM
thankxx Carol your sweet words of comment are refreshing to my eyes and encouraging to my soul... appreciate with luv..
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Date: 2/25/2011 2:10:00 PM
Magnificent words Carol .. lovely lilting lines to your precious Haiku ..good luck in the contest.. luv the entire scenery presented ...especially the verdant foliage.. awesome luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 11:40:00 PM
Lots of spring things happening in this lively haiku, Carol!
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:18:00 PM
I'm so sick of the winter. Reading your nice double haiku made me feel a bit warmer today.
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:15:00 PM
What could be more lovely than what you have described..I think your going to have success with this. BG
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