Connie Pachecho Poet Tail-rhyme

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Rendezvous

We traveled as the bunnies hop,
hopping the moon without a stop.
When the stars shine bright, he's on top.
Tic-tac-toe, we go,
finding love at a faster pace.
I love the ribbon, silk, and lace.
I love staring into his face.
It was passing snow.

connie pachecho

1/20/26

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2026 at 10:45 AM I like the bunny hop reference. Original and cute . Yes, the line needed at the end makes it difficult . Only so many words rhyme with are

Connie Pachecho January 20, 2026 at 9:31 AM Connie, where did you come up with that line tic-tac-toe we go? That's cute. Instead of saying XOXO or hugs and kisses, you substitute those words to not only follow the rhyme scheme but also give the poem some bite, fire, and game. Girl, your goose is shining today. Connie Pachecho January 20, 2026 at 9:33 AM Connie, you are so funny.

Connie Pachecho January 20, 2026 at 5:32 AM Note: I had prepared to enter a contest, but didn't read the rules, where the criterion was to end the poem ... with "and yet here we are." I guess I could have with this poem--Tic-tac-toe, we star. But then it wouldn't make sense. This poem I like. It makes a statement at the end.