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Rendezvous

flying over Gulf of Mexico, the boundless tranquil emerald water     not going to stop until I reach my destination ....   the vision of a beautiful country of my dream - where nature captivates with azure sky and serene lakes, fascinating ~ where my dearest friends are waiting for me!                                                                   my friend, Robin, how sweetly she sings at dusk and dawn,            when there is solitude descending over the mountains ~         and Oriole busy weaving intricate hanging nests ...   before the colourful flowers blossom in all their splendour, butterflies passionately kiss ravishing roses ~ trees spread their branches to the sky in ecstasy, lush and green turn grasses ~ I must reach there.                 I see a distinctive shape in the sky, which tells me...             my Geese friends are on their way, and also are the high-flier Ducks,      can’t miss the charming song white-throated Sparrow croons ~                         My Sweet Canada, Canada, Canada.                                                       Oh! I am so mesmerized  the way Great Blue Heron glides in a slow motion,     she is the best in fishing, being the most patient.   Killdeer, Mallard Duck, Red-winged Blackbird - all welcoming me to join a rendezvous of Spring-birds     Spring is almost here - nature’s joyful symphony will soon fill the air         me, the Ruby-throated Hummingbird - will soar across the ocean~ February 18, 2021 FIRST PLACE Inspired by " Spring Birds" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France For Personification Poem 150 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 3/3/2021 5:10:00 AM
This is such a beautiful poem Mala... "Robin singing from dusk to dawn, when there is solitude descending over the mountains",... loved your rendezvous of spring birds... Congrats on your win... Hugs ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/3/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, Anitha. Glad to hear you enjoyed the poem. Love ~ Mala
Date: 3/1/2021 12:54:00 AM
Wow, so glad to see this majestic poem on the top winners' list.. Congratulations dear Mala..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/1/2021 4:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dear friend, for congratulating. Really appreciate your kindness. Love ~ Mala
Date: 2/28/2021 11:26:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem ... our friends always come back, Mala :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. Yes, I love to watch the journey of these birds. Love ~ Mala
Date: 2/28/2021 9:24:00 AM
JCB is correct - this is a "majestic" poem Mala. I love the way you frame a journey of migration of the birds with your journey - a journey within a journey. Congratulations on your win. Much love and many blessings!
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Date: 2/28/2021 3:48:00 PM
Thank you, Sam, for your inspiring and thoughtful comments. Love~ Mala
Date: 2/28/2021 7:56:00 AM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge, with this lovely Personification, well done _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/28/2021 3:47:00 PM
Thank you Constance, it's such an honour. Appreciate so much.
Date: 2/21/2021 1:58:00 AM
Spring fills the air with this majestic poem..Keep coming dear Mala..
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Date: 2/21/2021 6:08:00 AM
Thanks, JCB. Spring brings hope.
Date: 2/20/2021 6:45:00 AM
A lovely expression of the stage which nature paints her beautiful portraits upon ! Cheers ! Kim
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/21/2021 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Nature is magical!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/21/2021 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Nature is magical!
Date: 2/18/2021 3:18:00 PM
I believe your pen just grew wings of its own, lol, beautiful and most poetic . Thank you for sharing Malabika.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/18/2021 4:57:00 PM
Dear Rose, really wish my pen grew wings! Thank you so much.
Date: 2/18/2021 8:26:00 AM
Great write with fascinating imagery and flow.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/18/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks, Subimal. Really appreciate your encouraging comments. Birds are fascinating! Best wishes ~ Mala
Date: 2/18/2021 6:15:00 AM
WoW. You did this very well. Great imagery. Enjoyed reading. All the best for contest. God bless. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/18/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Rama. Appreciate your inspiring comments. Love ~ Mala

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