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to kiss your lips, to drift away and feel the allure of palms burning soft tremors from love's timeless enchantment where time trembles, and grows still to wait shimmering souls lover's hearts meet in crescendo to bathe in warm eternal bliss hunger's fluid floating motion fill wishful wishes from this kiss warm nectared petals where beauty's bare blossoms bloom plucked from lover's lips feel sensual sensations in rendered realms of romance 4/2/18 contest It's All About Four sponsored by Broken Wings

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:01:00 PM
Great sensual imagery, Frederic, {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:38:00 PM
Glad to see this on the list, Frederic. Congratulation. It is so romantic.
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:36:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 4/29/2018 10:51:00 AM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this deeply romantic poem written as only you can do, well done !
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:51:00 AM
A passionate write Frederic. Love the smooth flowing alliteration.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sensual poem. Beautifully done :)
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Date: 4/11/2018 8:45:00 PM
"....warm nectared petals where beauty's bare blossoms bloom plucked from lover's lips..." - I'd go so far as to say, HOT. But that might just be my state of mind at present.
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Date: 4/4/2018 9:25:00 PM
Lovely! Filled with romance!
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Date: 4/4/2018 7:06:00 PM
wowowow, Constance's heart will flutter. So romantic!! Thanks for reading my poems recently. I am just so busy. I can't repay all the comments I got. Some scrolled off my page since I last replied on MOnday. DANG
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Date: 4/3/2018 1:04:00 PM
This would have been a petfect entry in am alliteratiom contest...such tender romantic lines..
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Date: 4/3/2018 9:38:00 AM
The Kiss, not a kiss, but of THE Kiss is your poem. I need my Tim to come home right NOW! Loved it ... CayCay
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Date: 4/2/2018 10:23:00 PM
Who says old ain't sexy. You certainly grabbed my attention with this write, Frederic.
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Date: 4/2/2018 4:01:00 PM
okay, i'm running out of oxygen, frederic... breathtaking poem, yes!.. huggs
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Date: 4/2/2018 2:23:00 PM
How intensely mind stimulating. Wonderful Frederic!
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Date: 4/2/2018 10:30:00 AM
absolutely stunning Frederic, so romantic my very best wishes for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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