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Rendered Realms of Romance

to kiss your lips, to drift away
and feel the allure of palms burning

soft tremors from love's timeless enchantment
where time trembles, and grows still
to wait shimmering souls

lover's hearts meet in crescendo
to bathe in warm eternal bliss
hunger's fluid floating motion
fill wishful wishes from this kiss

warm nectared petals
where beauty's bare blossoms bloom
plucked from lover's lips
feel sensual sensations
in rendered realms of romance


4/2/18 contest It's All About Four
sponsored by Broken Wings
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Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:01 PM
Great sensual imagery, Frederic, {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Glad to see this on the list, Frederic. Congratulation. It is so romantic.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Congrats!
La France Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this deeply romantic poem written as only you can do, well done !
Inman Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:51 AM
A passionate write Frederic. Love the smooth flowing alliteration.
Gauthier Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Beautiful poem, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
Gentry Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 3:10 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sensual poem. Beautifully done :)
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 8:45 PM
"....warm nectared petals where beauty's bare blossoms bloom plucked from lover's lips..." - I'd go so far as to say, HOT. But that might just be my state of mind at present.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 9:25 PM
Lovely! Filled with romance!
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 7:06 PM
wowowow, Constance's heart will flutter. So romantic!! Thanks for reading my poems recently. I am just so busy. I can't repay all the comments I got. Some scrolled off my page since I last replied on MOnday. DANG
One Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:04 PM
This would have been a petfect entry in am alliteratiom contest...such tender romantic lines..
Godwin Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 9:38 AM
The Kiss, not a kiss, but of THE Kiss is your poem. I need my Tim to come home right NOW! Loved it ... CayCay
Turner Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:23 PM
Who says old ain't sexy. You certainly grabbed my attention with this write, Frederic.
Onclaud Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 4:01 PM
okay, i'm running out of oxygen, frederic... breathtaking poem, yes!.. huggs
Thomas Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 2:23 PM
How intensely mind stimulating. Wonderful Frederic!
Allison Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 10:30 AM
absolutely stunning Frederic, so romantic my very best wishes for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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