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Very beautiful and excellent piece...........A.M.

So philosophic. Thankful for kind reminders, as I move on down from 65; and ponder remaining years.

Kim, this blew me away. Love these thought provoking poems and I am really in a mood today to contemplate life's journey. You capture life from its tentative and hopeful start to its inevitable conclusion. As we get nearer the end, I think we wonder how well we lived (how well we scored). Thanks for another beautiful poem. hugs. Janece

Loved every line. Excellent writing. Hugs Edith

Hi Patrice: I have always pondered my life at this stage and I can only echo your beautifully penned sentiments. Thanks for your comments on my Shakespeare poem.

What a pleasantly positive poem to read, Kim. I love the last two lines. That's a deep question, and you're inspiration soars. Never a dull moment on your page! Always, Laura

by the way, if you listen to the song, the silver girl part is toward the very end!!

Here is the link to the song that that line I quoted is inside. It's a simon and Garfunkel song! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jjNgn4r6SOA

Excellent. Well penned. Very inspirational write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Gee Kim, you've excelled with this wonderfully written sonnet. The flow and rhyme is spot on - thank you Kim - Lindsay

I like this - not trying to solve anything, just taking life for what it is. Love, daver

This poem was innovative, captivating, and entertaining. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and talent. Emile.

Very nice Kim. Really enjoyed.

So beautiful and inspirational, Kim. Your Sonnet offers so much wisdom in your beautifully flowing words. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra

life is choices, one after another, each one has cause and effect, and yet sometimes people become blind to the cause and effect, as though whatever was chosen never affected anything...it's hard to admit a choice was wrong..and yet we all make mistakes..that's how we learn...loved your poem...these were my first thoughts after reading.

Kim, your writing is always so clean. I mean, sophisticated and right on with the meter and rhyme. Shine on, silver girl! (do you know what song that is from?) Now I need to see The poem that inspired this one.

A wonderful write that depicted imagery that left the readers in awe and wonder. That is always you KIM. I love how you end your excellently write. Beautiful............A.M.

Profound thoughts with a wonderful message Kim,fantastic poem taken as an inspiration.

Profound and beautiful filled with messages of wonder, dear Kim! A seven. Have enjoyed it!

- A moving and beautiful sonnet, dear Kim :) - Thoughts about what comes after this life ..... nobody knows - (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)