Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Remotely

i snuck away
found a remote
haven

closing the door
behind me
to listen
with delight

as the rhythm
of crystal sounds
rang loud and clear

silent bells
in totally divine
harmony

an exquisite bubble
of sweet nothingness
surrounding me



AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021

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Caren Krutsinger March 3, 2019 at 9:42 PM This is how I felt today when my back began hurting, and my neck was sore and I took myself into a bubbly bath, soothing and so relaxing. Line Gauthier March 4, 2019 at 7:55 AM What a relief.

Judy Ball March 3, 2019 at 1:30 PM Hmmmmm Sounds like someone stepped outside to listen to the soothing sound of rain drops instead of the T.V. Nice job. Love it. God Bless, JB Line Gauthier March 3, 2019 at 1:49 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Judy.

Gershon Wolf March 3, 2019 at 1:14 PM Read it and read it again, and again... Intriguing, mysterious. Poetry! Kudos, Line! :) gw Line Gauthier March 3, 2019 at 1:50 PM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.