Russell Sivey Poet Sedoka

Remnant of Love

There are good remnants 
That come from strong emotions
Like the emotion of Love
Squeezing out is Joy
Elation pure Happiness
An ultimate feeling, Joy

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Dana'lynn Smith's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest

1/10/2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2012 at 6:05 AM Congratulations Russell on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor January 16, 2012 at 9:01 PM Congrats, Russ. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Robert A. Dufresne January 16, 2012 at 4:55 PM Nice win Russell...congratulations to you

Robert Pettit January 10, 2012 at 9:04 PM Dana'lynn should like this one because I like it. It is not easy to pack a decent amount of descriptiveness into a sedoka, but you accomplished the feat here.

Suzanne C. Goudreau January 10, 2012 at 5:09 PM Ultimately beautiful! Thank you for sharing. A clever and witty write!

Sara Kendrick January 10, 2012 at 5:09 PM Yes, true love exudes joy in the midst of hard times..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in Dana'lynn's contest..I appreciate the kind comments about my latest work..Sara