Reminiscing First Love

Sitting this moment under skies of grey
Reading some old poems I once wrote with you,
Contemplating where you are now this day
Sharing words our collaboration knew.

The love we shared on a day once like this
In times so long ago; the spring of youth,
My heart heaved in heavenly days of bliss
Speaking words of unmitigated truth.

Yet you went away far over the sea
Your parents taking you on life’s voyage,
Waving with a kiss as you left the quay
The horizon forever more my bridge.
I was only six and you only nine
Wondering if ever your thoughts as mine.

©Harry J Horsman 2014 ©Mandy M Tams 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/7/2017 6:29:00 AM
Touching, lovely as only love may be in common recollections (Decreet, Blue eyes etc.)
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Date: 1/5/2015 11:20:00 AM
Ahh!! Wonderful collaboration..Way to go you two..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 12/29/2014 8:45:00 AM
My first love was Christine an I was in grade three. All those years have passed and occasionally I do think of her and wonder what became of her.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:49:00 PM
Back again to relate that my wife suggests I write some poems like this! I had to point out this was a co-write with a lady's words in it too. My wife replied, then find a poetess to write with you. I dared not mention such is easier said than done. lol Congrats to you both-again!
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Date: 12/2/2014 10:18:00 AM
A superb collaboration. Giving a solid 7 and will surely have my wife read this great write tonight. Always a delight to find and read such inspiring work. Congrats to you both!
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Date: 10/12/2014 7:20:00 AM
Tender memories of youth. I can just picture the little boy and girl with heads close, a pencil clutched in a small fist, whispered words being transferred to paper. Ah the magic of love in the time of innocence. You perfectly described it.
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:03:00 AM
hey we did well with this one , you are an inspiration xx
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Date: 10/10/2014 10:36:00 PM
HI, Harry. Can't see your other poem yet. I will try to get to judging my contest tomorrow!! It's great to see you about the Soup lately!
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Date: 10/9/2014 1:40:00 PM
Sweet memories of the past excellently worded with beautiful free heartfelt colors. Simple but a silent sweet passion is mixed with. Lovely done, my lovely friend of always. Loved always,bl
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Date: 10/9/2014 1:46:00 AM
Very touching and mixed feelings poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/8/2014 10:51:00 PM
this is wonderful. YOu and Mandy are song birds together!
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Date: 10/8/2014 2:37:00 PM
Hi Harry,Hi Mandy,Hope you are fine dear friends.It was such a pleasure to read this poem which has mixed feelings of both sorrow and pang of absence ,and memories of joy before the departure through seas.Wow
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:40:00 PM
- Thank you for the beautiful memories,Harry & Mandy..... "in heavenly days of bliss" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2014 12:24:00 PM
Oh....OH..OH OH OH...how this touched me. I don't have words...I might shed a tear for I know this feeling well. Lovely Harry and Mandy...you two rock together! Hugs to both...SO touching!
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