Reminisce

Open those gifts,
Blink in the light,
Soften those lifts,
Preparing to ride,
Surprises of path,
Widen my smile,
Intention to laugh,
Shorten those miles,
Leaves blown down,
Breeze lifts the warmth,
Beautifully sound,
New love is born,
View of baby blue,
White clouds afloat,
Moments anew,
Time to devote,
Hand in hand,
Sight intertwined,
Forgo all plans,
Memories rewind,
Hearts on our sleeves,
Warmth to the touch,
In us we believe,
Loved us so much,
Remember?
Our first fall,
Night comes slumber,
Embrace we call,
Never forget,
What we once was,
Please come back!
My lost cause.

28th October 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2015 at 9:03 AM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Yuhas Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:41 PM
Very nice Fariq, Pete Yuhas
Merryman Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Congrats on your win, Fariq! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:52 PM
beautifully penned Fariq congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Dwelling in the past. Nice write, Fariq.
Negron Flores Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Congratulations Fariq
Ebbs Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:47 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
Lane Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 5:20 AM
Reminisce is a lovely, although it has a sad ending, picture of the happiness you once had.
Yusoff Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Thank you for your kind words!
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