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do you remember as a child when you and your friends find a simple spot of grass as high as your knees that at that moment you treat as bushes, and trees with trunks barely as big as your arms, which you already consider a jungle and a path of water from storm drains only a couple of inches wide imagined as a river? caring not for mosquito bites you play as if you found a new planet to call your own. and that was already the adventure of a lifetime.

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Date: 6/10/2012 2:32:00 PM
Very nice poem. Thanks you for your comments on my poems, but I only started writing last fall. You should read some of the others that have been writing longer. It is an adventure.
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