Remembering You

As I close my eyes I pray I remembered you - the sun may not rise

Edward J. Ebbs - January 10, 2016
Monoku choice: 17 Syllables


Written for a Contest, Monoku or ONE LINE poem #1

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Vladislav Raven

March 20, 2016 at 12:36 PM

Hi Ed, i always find these single line poetry forms pretty hard but i must persevere and keep trying them. The same thing i do each night Ed, Pray for my Love lest i wake not on the morrow. I am faving this one definitely. I like the thought...Vlad.

Andrea Dietrich

January 27, 2016 at 7:12 PM

Congrats for your win, Ed.

Susan Gentry

January 27, 2016 at 2:14 AM

Congratulations on this awesome monoku! Thought provoking....

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:25 AM

EDWARDS, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

James Inman

January 25, 2016 at 5:34 AM

Very nice, deep write, Edward.

Poet Destroyer A

January 24, 2016 at 8:49 PM

Edwards, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

Andrea Dietrich

January 20, 2016 at 8:17 PM

very nicely done, Edward. I enjoyed seeing this monoku. And I'm glad you liked my color poem.

Richard Lamoureux

January 19, 2016 at 8:58 AM

Thanks for choosing my poem for your contest. I enjoyed your monoku, good luck in the contest.

Constance La France

January 19, 2016 at 2:02 AM

Edward, true, we never know when our end will be, never, wonderful monoku, a winner to me, and I would like to thank you so much for my placement in your Anacreontic Verse contest, I am honored ~