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Remembering You

As I close my eyes I pray I remembered you - the sun may not rise

Edward J. Ebbs - January 10, 2016
Monoku choice: 17 Syllables


Written for a Contest, Monoku or ONE LINE poem #1

Copyright © Edward Ebbs | Year Posted 2016

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Vladislav Raven Date: 3/20/2016 12:36:00 PM Hi Ed, i always find these single line poetry forms pretty hard but i must persevere and keep trying them. The same thing i do each night Ed, Pray for my Love lest i wake not on the morrow. I am faving this one definitely. I like the thought...Vlad. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/27/2016 7:12:00 PM Congrats for your win, Ed. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 1/27/2016 2:14:00 AM Congratulations on this awesome monoku! Thought provoking.... Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/26/2016 11:25:00 AM EDWARDS, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT ** Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 1/25/2016 5:34:00 AM Very nice, deep write, Edward. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/24/2016 8:49:00 PM Edwards, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA -- Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/20/2016 8:17:00 PM very nicely done, Edward. I enjoyed seeing this monoku. And I'm glad you liked my color poem. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/19/2016 8:58:00 AM Thanks for choosing my poem for your contest. I enjoyed your monoku, good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 1/19/2016 2:02:00 AM Edward, true, we never know when our end will be, never, wonderful monoku, a winner to me, and I would like to thank you so much for my placement in your Anacreontic Verse contest, I am honored ~ Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/11/2016 1:27:00 AM Well done, dear friend! The sun will rise, we simply wouldn't see it with our earthly eyes! Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 1/10/2016 8:59:00 PM I like this one Ed. We never know if we will awaken from our sleep. Login to Reply