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Remembering When

I remember when... Everything still there Seems so easy but yet perfect A normal life that I can give and share I remember when... Everything turn so wrong The world was upside down But somehow I still stood and strong I remember when... I fell for a love A love that ends to be hurt Nevertheless sweet love meant to be tough I remember when... I sat under the roof Stared at the empty street Sank by the thoughts of my own goof I remember... Yes I remember when I did much adventures The flowers of my times When I filled every moments with so much pleasures I remember when... I graduate from a test Not like some other test The class of journey in life which I took with all of my best

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/20/2013 11:33:00 PM
Hi Yanny, I miss your visits. I hope all is well with you.
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Date: 6/15/2013 8:25:00 AM
Good afternoon Yanny, hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/17/2013 6:44:00 AM
Hello Rick how are you there? :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/13/2013 8:22:00 PM
It is good to have sweet sad memories, they let us know we have lived. This is very special Yanny. I was so happy to read two poems. Hugs Rick
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/14/2013 8:24:00 AM
Thank you Rick :D glad to see your visit today :D agree about what you thought, :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/11/2013 4:15:00 AM
- Yanny my dear friend .... Life is short .... enjoy the future! - Well written! - Have a beautiful day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/11/2013 4:26:00 AM
Hello Anne missing you here my friend :D, I believe life is short, and I do enjoy it as long as I live, no matter how hard it is :D glad to see you visit today Anne, wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 6/11/2013 3:55:00 AM
I do remember lying in our roof thinking about the future and stuff. cant resist to comment to this cute girl's poem. LOL. (/>_<)/ _|__|_
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Nato Calubiran
Date: 6/11/2013 8:14:00 PM
maybe you two were thinking too much you imagined seeing a ghost or maybe you really did saw one. hahaha. creatures of the night what bad experience might it have done to you
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 6/11/2013 4:24:00 AM
Thank you Nato, glad to have your kindly visit today :D, I also remember when I did the same way like you do, lying upon the roof in the starry night and it ends eery by seeing a ghost, lol, me and my friend went back to our room in rushed :p wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny

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