Remembering Makes Me Smile

I first dreamed I could fly when I was very young.
Ascending past the tallest trees plunged me among
the clouds—and past, but sun’s bright rays refused to burn
my tender flesh. I felt quite free on each sojourn.

Did love of make-believe engender dreams of flight?
Was it vice versa? I just know I still delight
in memories of dreamt adventures in the night.

Perhaps you’ll laugh and think I’m nuts, but I confess,
from time to time--though I am in my seventies--
I dream that, only briefly, I have taken flight
and drifted back to bed upon a pleasant breeze.

Psychiatrists might say my life is incomplete--
that dreams of flying symbolize that thing I lack!
I won’t believe this unless in my dreams of flight
I leave the earth and dream of never coming back!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 6/24/2020 9:42:00 PM
This just rolls off the tongue and into the sweet section of the mind! Very precious penning, indeed, Janice! See you in the winner's circle! Warm wishes, Gershon
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2020 10:12:00 PM
Gershon, THANK YOU for this wonderful comment! Janice
Date: 6/23/2020 10:01:00 AM
Yeahh me too, and I still delight and enjoy dreams of flight . This is a wonderful cool flying poem. Kudos. ---- ...Plz pleez do read and comment my newest piece, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below that poem so you will confirm the matter further. ----
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2020 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much. I certainly will read yours too! :-) Janice
Date: 6/21/2020 4:19:00 PM
It seems that, as fish, we made the transition to land as a compromise, so continue producing offspring who can take off! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 6/20/2020 10:57:00 PM
Hello Janice … in a time with little to worry about and dreams about being superhuman performing super feats. These are great to reflect on as grow into the highs and lows of society - thank you Janice - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/21/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Lindsay. Janice
Date: 6/20/2020 5:03:00 PM
Wonderful, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/20/2020 5:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
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