Remembering Dad Premiere Contest Winner

“…I will never leave thee, nor forsake thee.”* Such Scripture truth braces me up with God’s grace Propelling me to move on, bounce back, march forward Every time my yearning for my human-fortress intensifies. Vulnerable to attacking nostalgic angst I’m now succumbing to the reminiscence-force My heart cannot defy, and surely my mind can’t deny. Vividly lingering, and now steadfastly clinging … Images of my Dad’s cheerful countenance Prodding and inspiring me to do my utmost Caress of his hands, soothing my feverish forehead Nurturing while gearing-up my faith-fortitude The warmth of his loving fatherly counsel Punctuated with, “I love you, my darling daughter.” There I was with my dear Dad in his intensive care nook Singing psalms, reading Bible verses to him Praying fervently… yet hiding my grief. With my hands clasped in his, I saw him smile with his boyish grin Uttering no word, but I heard in my heart his shout of care... Serenely, he gave up his final mortal breath Leaving me and my siblings grateful to the Almighty Father While singing “It is well with my soul.” I imagined my phone ringing, “Hello, Dad… I miss you…” Staring at his photo, I exclaimed “I see you and Mom holding hands in heaven.” Calendar reverberates awakening reality… Dad’s celebrating with angels his death anniversary.**
*Hebrews 13:5 “… I will never leave thee, nor forsake thee.” Today is one month death anniversary of Dad who went home to heaven on January 2, 2019 at 5PM. February 2, 2019 Written on the one month death anniversary of Dad who went home to heaven on January 2, 2019 at 5PM 1st place, “Loved and Lost” Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh; judged on 1/26/2023 1st place, “Poem Titled Saudade” Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 2/24/2019
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Date: 1/28/2023 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Beata! :)
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Date: 1/26/2023 1:52:00 AM
Beautifully done. I know you miss him. Congrats on top win and God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 2/26/2019 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations Beata on your win! Very well written. So much love. Such a great witness! David
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Date: 2/25/2019 4:38:00 PM
Lovely, Beata. What a beautiful relationship. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Date: 2/24/2019 10:08:00 PM
Congratulations Beata, on this wonderful Saudade for your father.
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:39:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in this contest, Beata - A deeply moving writing - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2019 12:19:00 PM
An excellent write! Congratulations on your touching poem!
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Date: 2/24/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Beata. Your poem really spoke to me as I also lost my Dad(almost 2 years ago). Incredibly moving! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 2/2/2019 7:20:00 AM
Beata, I am sincerely touched by your beautiful and moving memorial to your father. I am so sorry for your loss. He sounds like a truly wonderful person; may he rest in peace. Thank you for your loving and steadfast remembrance of him. Blessings to you and your entire family. With deepest sympathy, Bartholomew
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Date: 2/2/2019 7:12:00 AM
such a lovely tribute to your father, your faith shines so brightly Beata:-) hugs Jan xx
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