Remembering a Garden

I taste and feel the rich soil , sifting it through my fingers 
Looking back on my childhood, a memory lingers
 
In the evening my father would take down the hoe
Mother behind..letting her happiness show

Together they'd work  and talk of the day
Secret smiles,  laughter.., their time to play

The garden was sustenance in a time of great need
They counted on return from every small seed

But the simple pleasure they got from the task
Is the treasure I seek, no more could I ask


My Assigned Theme...My Garden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/1/2010 9:50:00 PM
Barbara, one of my favorite poems I've ever read. In these days and times it seems most folk have lost sight of the joy found in the simple yet gratifying things of life. Loved this poem, congrats on your placement - YF4L, God Bless, mj
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:41:00 AM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in Whats My Theme Contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy another amazing win..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/24/2010 11:22:00 AM
Hey this is really good with great rhyme.....Good Luck.....Larry
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Date: 5/22/2010 12:39:00 PM
Beauty in memory Barbara, splendid family images flow with your words. Got to be a winner in Constance's contest >> James
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:47:00 PM
This is nice. Easy to read, easy to understand and easy to love. Great poem. Looks like your assigned theme was made just for you. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 10:58:00 AM
clever, warm and very satisfying to read. thank you, chuck
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Date: 5/20/2010 10:51:00 AM
very cute and memorable poem.
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