Remembered Love

Ashes waft over the meadow 
a jet stream of sorrow, 
beckoning the widow to the 
edge, down to the river. 

Contented epoch, at the 
creek where the wolves run, 
he lived and laughed. 

We watched the bright blue 
stars foxtrot across the milky 
way, a midnight indigo quilt 
shivering with light. 
 
Mountain men whose 
toughened hands cradle their 
violin and mouth harp. Music 
soared amidst craggy 
chiseled countenance. 

We listened to the chaste 
screech of a hawk, the forlorn 
cry of a mountain cat, 
soft snuffling of a bear, 
watery splash of a fish. 

You and I waltzed in the 
meadow; no music needed 
other than the love song that 
pulsed in our hearts. 

Can I have this dance for 
the rest of my life? 
Together it seemed so… 

right, 
wrong, 
simple, 
eternal, 
joyful, 
lonely, 
sad… 

...happily ever after? 

No.

Time enough for us to love, 
laugh, share, be silly, fight, 
forgive, and cry? 
To seethe and despair? 

Yes.

Trisha Sugarek from
Butterflies and Bullets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bangalee Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 6:08 AM
superb love; remembered by the true heart
A  Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 9:16 AM
Trisha :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:45 AM
I love this...very very creative layout..you captured my attention from start to finish!
Sugarek Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:12 AM
thank you for your kind words. Trish
Andresen Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 8:30 AM
- Spread happiness and love .... then the world will be good to live in - well written poem, Trisha !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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