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Remember When

Remember when we walked across the field
Leaves of autumn crunching beneath our feet
The color of the trees was what appealed
Maybe to be alone, our love complete
Those red and yellow leaves seen were replete
Holding hands in anticipation then
Once behind the growth hidden in the glen
Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze
Long as memory holds visit again
When autumn's angular sun shines its rays
     

Contest: Dizain Poetry
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Date: October 28, 2022

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Theme: Nature combined with human nature

glen-noun- valley
replete-verb-completely fill

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Nancy Kaufman Date: 11/17/2022 7:43:00 AM Belated congratulations on this one, a most deserving win. Nancy Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/17/2022 12:16:00 PM Why, thank you, Nancy. Sara

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2022 11:23:00 AM I really loved this one. A well deserved win, Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2022 1:41:00 PM Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Janice Canerdy Date: 11/8/2022 8:26:00 PM Lovely, romantic piece, Sara. A BIG CONGRATS on your win. Janice Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2022 3:40:00 AM Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate your visit with congratulations. Sara

Suzanne Delaney Date: 11/7/2022 5:33:00 PM Such a beautiful scene you painted with words. Love how your kiss lit up the dogwoods. Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/8/2022 2:43:00 AM Thank you, Suzanne for the kind review of my work and congratulations as well. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/6/2022 9:12:00 AM Delightfully romantic and lovely! Congratulations on your win, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 2:23:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Terry Miller Date: 11/6/2022 7:26:00 AM Wonderfully romantic, congratulations! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 2:20:00 PM Thank you, Terry. I appreciate the insight. Sara

Heidi Sands Date: 11/6/2022 6:06:00 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Sara ! :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 10:00:00 AM Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/6/2022 5:16:00 AM Back with BIG congrats on your win, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 9:55:00 AM Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Christuraj Alex Date: 11/6/2022 4:56:00 AM Very picturesque scene of love. Congratulations! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 9:55:00 AM Thank you, Alex. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George Date: 11/6/2022 4:10:00 AM "Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze"...... Beautiful line...... powerfully romantic ! The memories are so alluring that push you to visit that romantic spot once more! Congratulations dear Sara on your first place win! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 8:21:00 AM Valsa, Thank you for your visit with such a nice review of my work and congratulations as well. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Beryl Edmonds Date: 11/5/2022 6:47:00 PM Back with my congratulations Sara, your lovely poem is so deserving of the win in Sotto’s contest… Belle Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/6/2022 3:25:00 AM Thank you, Belle, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 11/5/2022 8:26:00 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Sara. You have composed such an excellent poem. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/5/2022 1:22:00 PM Lasaad, Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Ann Peck Date: 10/30/2022 11:50:00 AM Sara, Your poem is so nostalgic and lovely. I really like the Dizain form and your poem fits it nicely. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/30/2022 2:04:00 PM Thank you, Ann. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/29/2022 11:15:00 AM very romantic and beautiful, Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/29/2022 12:31:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. I am delighted that you liked it. Sara

Kelly Deschler Date: 10/29/2022 7:58:00 AM A lovely, romantic poem set in the beauty of the autumn season... Wonderful work, Sara! Best wishes for the contest! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/29/2022 12:27:00 PM Why, thank you, Kelly. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Beryl Edmonds Date: 10/28/2022 2:38:00 PM A lovely Dizain in a walk down memory Lane Sara. All the best… Belle Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/29/2022 3:29:00 AM Belle, Thank you for the best wishes and the kind review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/28/2022 8:22:00 AM Lovey Dizain. Full of imagery. Best for a win. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2022 8:26:00 AM Why, thank you, Victor. I am encouraged by your comments. Sara

Alexis Y. Date: 10/28/2022 7:35:00 AM Hi Sara, You penned a good entry for the contest theme. Lovely memories filled with love. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2022 8:24:00 AM Alex, I appreciate the confidence in my penning. Yes, sometimes memories are good, very good. Thanks for hoping for a nice day and weekend. I am delighted you dropped by. Sara

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/28/2022 6:10:00 AM A poem dwelling merrily in autumn's colors and splendid memories. Best to you, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2022 7:24:00 AM Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the best to you wish. Sara