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Remember when we walked across the field Leaves of autumn crunching beneath our feet The color of the trees was what appealed Maybe to be alone, our love complete Those red and yellow leaves seen were replete Holding hands in anticipation then Once behind the growth hidden in the glen Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze Long as memory holds visit again When autumn's angular sun shines its rays
Contest: Dizain Poetry Sponsor: Sotto Poet Date: October 28, 2022 Checked with syllablecounter.net Checked with Grammar checker on this site Theme: Nature combined with human nature glen-noun- valley replete-verb-completely fill

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Date: 11/17/2022 7:43:00 AM
Belated congratulations on this one, a most deserving win. Nancy
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/17/2022 12:16:00 PM
Why, thank you, Nancy. Sara
Date: 11/9/2022 11:23:00 AM
I really loved this one. A well deserved win, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara
Date: 11/8/2022 8:26:00 PM
Lovely, romantic piece, Sara. A BIG CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/9/2022 3:40:00 AM
Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate your visit with congratulations. Sara
Date: 11/7/2022 5:33:00 PM
Such a beautiful scene you painted with words. Love how your kiss lit up the dogwoods. Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne for the kind review of my work and congratulations as well. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 9:12:00 AM
Delightfully romantic and lovely! Congratulations on your win, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 7:26:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic, congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, Terry. I appreciate the insight. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations for your beautiful win Sara ! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 5:16:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your win, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 4:56:00 AM
Very picturesque scene of love. Congratulations!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thank you, Alex. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 11/6/2022 4:10:00 AM
"Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze"...... Beautiful line...... powerfully romantic ! The memories are so alluring that push you to visit that romantic spot once more! Congratulations dear Sara on your first place win!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 8:21:00 AM
Valsa, Thank you for your visit with such a nice review of my work and congratulations as well. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara
Date: 11/5/2022 6:47:00 PM
Back with my congratulations Sara, your lovely poem is so deserving of the win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/6/2022 3:25:00 AM
Thank you, Belle, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 11/5/2022 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Sara. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2022 1:22:00 PM
Lasaad, Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Date: 10/30/2022 11:50:00 AM
Sara, Your poem is so nostalgic and lovely. I really like the Dizain form and your poem fits it nicely.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/30/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you, Ann. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/29/2022 11:15:00 AM
very romantic and beautiful, Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2022 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I am delighted that you liked it. Sara
Date: 10/29/2022 7:58:00 AM
A lovely, romantic poem set in the beauty of the autumn season... Wonderful work, Sara! Best wishes for the contest!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2022 12:27:00 PM
Why, thank you, Kelly. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Date: 10/28/2022 2:38:00 PM
A lovely Dizain in a walk down memory Lane Sara. All the best… Belle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2022 3:29:00 AM
Belle, Thank you for the best wishes and the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 10/28/2022 8:22:00 AM
Lovey Dizain. Full of imagery. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/28/2022 8:26:00 AM
Why, thank you, Victor. I am encouraged by your comments. Sara
Date: 10/28/2022 7:35:00 AM
Hi Sara, You penned a good entry for the contest theme. Lovely memories filled with love. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/28/2022 8:24:00 AM
Alex, I appreciate the confidence in my penning. Yes, sometimes memories are good, very good. Thanks for hoping for a nice day and weekend. I am delighted you dropped by. Sara
Date: 10/28/2022 6:10:00 AM
A poem dwelling merrily in autumn's colors and splendid memories. Best to you, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/28/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the best to you wish. Sara

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