Sara Kendrick Poet Dizain

Notes About The Poem

Remember When

Remember when we walked across the field
Leaves of autumn crunching beneath our feet
The color of the trees was what appealed
Maybe to be alone, our love complete
Those red and yellow leaves seen were replete
Holding hands in anticipation then
Once behind the growth hidden in the glen
Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze
Long as memory holds visit again
When autumn's angular sun shines its rays
     

Contest: Dizain Poetry
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Date: October 28, 2022

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Theme: Nature combined with human nature

glen-noun- valley
replete-verb-completely fill

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Nancy Kaufman November 17, 2022 at 7:43 AM Belated congratulations on this one, a most deserving win. Nancy Sara Kendrick November 17, 2022 at 12:16 PM Why, thank you, Nancy. Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2022 at 11:23 AM I really loved this one. A well deserved win, Sara Sara Kendrick November 9, 2022 at 1:41 PM Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Janice Canerdy November 8, 2022 at 8:26 PM Lovely, romantic piece, Sara. A BIG CONGRATS on your win. Janice Sara Kendrick November 9, 2022 at 3:40 AM Why, thank you, Janice. I appreciate your visit with congratulations. Sara

Suzanne Delaney November 7, 2022 at 5:33 PM Such a beautiful scene you painted with words. Love how your kiss lit up the dogwoods. Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ Sara Kendrick November 8, 2022 at 2:43 AM Thank you, Suzanne for the kind review of my work and congratulations as well. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 6, 2022 at 9:12 AM Delightfully romantic and lovely! Congratulations on your win, Sara. Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 2:23 PM Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Terry Miller November 6, 2022 at 7:26 AM Wonderfully romantic, congratulations! Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 2:20 PM Thank you, Terry. I appreciate the insight. Sara

Heidi Sands November 6, 2022 at 6:06 AM Congratulations for your beautiful win Sara ! :) Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 10:00 AM Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Vijay Pandit November 6, 2022 at 5:16 AM Back with BIG congrats on your win, Sara. Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2022 at 4:56 AM Very picturesque scene of love. Congratulations! Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank you, Alex. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Valsa George November 6, 2022 at 4:10 AM "Your kiss 'pon my lips set dogwoods ablaze"...... Beautiful line...... powerfully romantic ! The memories are so alluring that push you to visit that romantic spot once more! Congratulations dear Sara on your first place win! Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 8:21 AM Valsa, Thank you for your visit with such a nice review of my work and congratulations as well. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Beryl Edmonds November 5, 2022 at 6:47 PM Back with my congratulations Sara, your lovely poem is so deserving of the win in Sotto’s contest… Belle Sara Kendrick November 6, 2022 at 3:25 AM Thank you, Belle, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Sotto Poet November 5, 2022 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Sara. You have composed such an excellent poem. Sara Kendrick November 5, 2022 at 1:22 PM Lasaad, Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Ann Peck October 30, 2022 at 11:50 AM Sara, Your poem is so nostalgic and lovely. I really like the Dizain form and your poem fits it nicely. Sara Kendrick October 30, 2022 at 2:04 PM Thank you, Ann. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 29, 2022 at 11:15 AM very romantic and beautiful, Sara Sara Kendrick October 29, 2022 at 12:31 PM Thank you, Andrea. I am delighted that you liked it. Sara

Kelly Deschler October 29, 2022 at 7:58 AM A lovely, romantic poem set in the beauty of the autumn season... Wonderful work, Sara! Best wishes for the contest! Sara Kendrick October 29, 2022 at 12:27 PM Why, thank you, Kelly. I appreciate the kind review. Sara

Beryl Edmonds October 28, 2022 at 2:38 PM A lovely Dizain in a walk down memory Lane Sara. All the best… Belle Sara Kendrick October 29, 2022 at 3:29 AM Belle, Thank you for the best wishes and the kind review of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar October 28, 2022 at 8:22 AM Lovey Dizain. Full of imagery. Best for a win. Sara Kendrick October 28, 2022 at 8:26 AM Why, thank you, Victor. I am encouraged by your comments. Sara

Alexis Y. October 28, 2022 at 7:35 AM Hi Sara, You penned a good entry for the contest theme. Lovely memories filled with love. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day and weekend-Alexis Sara Kendrick October 28, 2022 at 8:24 AM Alex, I appreciate the confidence in my penning. Yes, sometimes memories are good, very good. Thanks for hoping for a nice day and weekend. I am delighted you dropped by. Sara

Vijay Pandit October 28, 2022 at 6:10 AM A poem dwelling merrily in autumn's colors and splendid memories. Best to you, Sara. Sara Kendrick October 28, 2022 at 7:24 AM Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the best to you wish. Sara