Remember Them

We remember them on this day
Those who fell in war
The men who came from far away 
To fight forever more
They stood for freedom duty bound
Walked together one and all 
Pride and smiles were seen all around
In uniforms they looked tall
In trenches men lost much rest
The noise of guns not done
Wafting cordite in the air 
Battles still far from won
Despair and disease took their toll
Death rang its bells aloud 
So many taken on the knoll
Within the reaper’s shroud 
Men starved and froze, they hurt and bled
They asked if God still cared
Muddy trenches their final bed
Their corpses blankly stared


All the while their wives had fears
Their dear fathers fretted so 
Mothers. sisters shed such tears 
They made rivers overflow
Notes from home pumped up their hearts
Families expressed much love
All those loved ones did their parts
Sending food and socks and gloves
Men held tight to thoughts sublime 
Pictures of their sweethearts near
Killing men now not a crime 
So reluctant to show fear
At long last the war did end 
The survivors took their leave
Not forgetting fallen friends
They were now able to grieve
For dead friends and childhood lost
Was it worth the price they paid
Freedom has such a high cost
Yes! In unison they said

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Date: 9/11/2018 8:31:00 PM
Yes! Madeleine. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 9/12/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you Line!
Date: 9/11/2018 8:06:00 PM
Surprised that mine is the first ever comment on this poem. This was another poem that was everything I had hoped to find with this contest. Congratulations on your top 10 finish!
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 9/12/2018 8:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Jesse!
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