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Remember the Day

Can You Remember the day a time when you were young you could go and play feeling safe and no worries so much you wanted to do life was never going to end you had dreams of such hope and you could reach the stars but as you grew up the world changed your life became rearranged hopes became fantasies and wishes how far could you go and climb the world came in with a crash and now you struggle to survive your only doing what makes it but in the end i will win i shall retire and live my dream and hope for a better life for all

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Date: 10/20/2018 12:37:00 AM
There is always hope and dreams. Nicely worded and told!
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Billy Jones
Date: 10/20/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you very kindly White Wolf, hope your dreams come also!
Date: 10/19/2018 11:26:00 PM
What a beautiful, nostalgic poem. And yes, the life as it is now has so much hardship. But we struggle on!
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Billy Jones
Date: 10/19/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you much Darren, this is what inspires me, and your help was very much loved

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