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Remember Remember the 5th of November

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November Ninette Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 11/09/23

Bang! fireworks explode in the pitch dark sky a kaleidoscope of bright sparkles fall to earth with a bang

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. I've heard of the celebration. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/25/2023 2:05:00 PM

Love it! Fireworks - and a bonfire ;) Congratulations Jan! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/24/2023 8:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun Ninette write. Love your colorful fireworks picture. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2023 8:22:00 PM

Well I knew somebody on the other side of the pond most have written this one. Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/23/2023 3:08:00 PM

Definitely a colourful Ninette that deservedly finished on the podium, Jan! Congratulations!! Regards & Hugs // paul

Marilene Evans

Date: 11/23/2023 12:59:00 PM

This is so so brightly, sparkling good. Congratulations.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2023 4:01:00 AM

this is excellent, Jan - love the kaleidoscope description

Terry Flood

Date: 11/10/2023 5:40:00 PM

A wonderful Guy Fawkes write, Jan. Enjoyed. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 10:09:00 PM

Thanks Terry xx Soupmail xxx:-) hugs Jan x

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2023 12:40:00 PM

Excellent Jan, thoroughly enjoyed it. Blessings.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 10:09:00 PM

thanks Victor :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2023 8:11:00 AM

Lovely, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeff Connelly

Date: 11/10/2023 4:05:00 AM

Thanks Jan. I didn't see any other Guy Fawkes poems, and so thought everyone had forgotten about it...

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 9:55:00 AM

we watched a display on 4th Nov, had friends round and I made lovely autumnal soup - sweet potato, carrot and ginger - mmmm wash lush:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2023 2:25:00 AM

- I love fireworks ... so beautiful ... great writing, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 9:54:00 AM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/9/2023 7:10:00 PM

Great Ninette for the contest of Nov., Jan. Many blessings your way.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 1:47:00 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 5:39:00 PM

Nice Ninette, Jan. I enjoyed the celebration, my friend. Write On! Bill

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 1:47:00 AM

thanks Bill:-) you are so blessed to have a poetry loving spouse!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 4:12:00 PM

am I correct in assuming NOv. 5th is Guy Fawkes Night? Your poem made it sound like an wonderfully explosive event. Well done, Jan. Hugs, Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 1:46:00 AM

Yes 5th November is Bonfire night:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

Date: 11/9/2023 2:48:00 PM

Your write precious poet, amplifies the fireworks which you've shared here..."remember remember Jan, the fith uv November"...Guy Fawkes Night ;) I am in hopes that dear Andrea can assimilate "Guy Fawkes night" to your pic which you've attached to your write...one who doesn't know may think that your write iz far off uv Andrea's contest(4th July)...i luv the terse uv your write here Jan(it's just mine be) Have the awesome, whatever your heart celebrates this kool season...much love, edvard ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2023 1:46:00 AM

Thanks James:-) yes I made sure it didnt get confused with July 4th lol:-) hugs Jan xx