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November Ninette Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich 11/09/23

Remember Remember the 5th of November

Bang!
fireworks
explode in
the pitch dark sky
a kaleidoscope
of bright sparkles
fall to earth
with a
bang

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Sara Kendrick

November 26, 2023 at 5:57 AM

Congratulations on this winning work in Andrea's contest. I enjoyed reading it. I've heard of the celebration. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

November 25, 2023 at 2:05 PM

Love it! Fireworks - and a bonfire ;) Congratulations Jan! :)

Paula Goldsmith

November 24, 2023 at 8:07 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun Ninette write. Love your colorful fireworks picture. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2023 at 8:22 PM

Well I knew somebody on the other side of the pond most have written this one. Congrats, my friend.

Paul Callus

November 23, 2023 at 3:08 PM

Definitely a colourful Ninette that deservedly finished on the podium, Jan! Congratulations!! Regards & Hugs // paul

Marilene Evans

November 23, 2023 at 12:59 PM

This is so so brightly, sparkling good. Congratulations.

Jack Horne

November 11, 2023 at 4:01 AM

this is excellent, Jan - love the kaleidoscope description

Terry Flood

November 10, 2023 at 5:40 PM

A wonderful Guy Fawkes write, Jan. Enjoyed. Terry

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 10:09 PM

Thanks Terry xx Soupmail xxx:-) hugs Jan x

Victor Buhagiar

November 10, 2023 at 12:40 PM

Excellent Jan, thoroughly enjoyed it. Blessings.

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 10:09 PM

thanks Victor :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

November 10, 2023 at 8:11 AM

Lovely, Jan!

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeff Connelly

November 10, 2023 at 4:05 AM

Thanks Jan. I didn't see any other Guy Fawkes poems, and so thought everyone had forgotten about it...

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 9:55 AM

we watched a display on 4th Nov, had friends round and I made lovely autumnal soup - sweet potato, carrot and ginger - mmmm wash lush:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 10, 2023 at 2:25 AM

- I love fireworks ... so beautiful ... great writing, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 9:54 AM

thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

November 9, 2023 at 7:10 PM

Great Ninette for the contest of Nov., Jan. Many blessings your way.

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 1:47 AM

thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Bill Baker

November 9, 2023 at 5:39 PM

Nice Ninette, Jan. I enjoyed the celebration, my friend. Write On! Bill

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 1:47 AM

thanks Bill:-) you are so blessed to have a poetry loving spouse!:-) hugs Jan xx

James Peranteau

November 9, 2023 at 2:48 PM

Your write precious poet, amplifies the fireworks which you've shared here..."remember remember Jan, the fith uv November"...Guy Fawkes Night ;) I am in hopes that dear Andrea can assimilate "Guy Fawkes night" to your pic which you've attached to your write...one who doesn't know may think that your write iz far off uv Andrea's contest(4th July)...i luv the terse uv your write here Jan(it's just mine be) Have the awesome, whatever your heart celebrates this kool season...much love, edvard ;)

Jan Allison

November 10, 2023 at 1:46 AM

Thanks James:-) yes I made sure it didnt get confused with July 4th lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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