Remember Me This Way

WHEN THE SUN SETS ON YOUR TIRED EYES AND THE WORLD 
AS YOU KNOW IT HAS TURNED FROM GOLD TO EVENING AMBER,  
RETRIEVE IN THE CHAMBER OF YOUR THOUGHTS AND THINK OF ME; 
REMEMBER THE LAUGHTER WE SHARED ON OUR WAY TO THE LAKE 
THE BRUSH OF A LEAF AGAINST YOUR CHEEK, 
THE CARESS OF MY LOVING EYES EASILY SLIDING 
TOWARDS YOU , LIKE THE DAWN SLIPPING INTO A NEW HORIZON,  
MAKING OUR WORLD THAT MUCH BETTER * 
WHILE THE FISH SWAM IN THE GURGLING RIVER WE FISHED 
SIDE BY SIDE, HEART OF VELVET SKIN OF HYDE 
TWO LOVERS LOSING THEMSELVES IN THE MOMENT 
WHEN THE SUN LOWERS DOWN FROM THE PAVILLION SKY 
REMEMBER HOW MUCH I LOVED YOU AND ALWAYS WILL 
WHEN THE NIGHT ARRIVES TO SIT ON YOUR WINDOW SILL 
REMEMBER TO THINK OF ME,  AND BE STILL.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Proxenos Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 10:39 AM
MEMORIES ARE LOCKED IN YOUR HEART AND SOUL ROSE AND YOU ONLY HAVE THE KEY TO UNLOCK THEM AND REMINISCE - THIS POEM HAS TRUE LOVE MEMORIES, AWESOME POEM. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
Ricci Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Hello MR - Your opening line sets the tone and voice of your entry. I very much enjoyed the quiet reflections which made the emotive factor shine and come through. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry soup.
Alex Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Your poems are really fantastic.
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:57 AM
Oh, how delightfully romantic! Love shines in your verses, Vienna.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 5:16 AM
A very romantic meditation, where feelings abound.
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:58 AM
Beautiful memories Rose, a very emotional write. But they live on in your heart and those cherished memories that you made together. Tom
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