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WHEN THE SUN SETS ON YOUR TIRED EYES AND THE WORLD AS YOU KNOW IT HAS TURNED FROM GOLD TO EVENING AMBER, RETRIEVE IN THE CHAMBER OF YOUR THOUGHTS AND THINK OF ME; REMEMBER THE LAUGHTER WE SHARED ON OUR WAY TO THE LAKE THE BRUSH OF A LEAF AGAINST YOUR CHEEK, THE CARESS OF MY LOVING EYES EASILY SLIDING TOWARDS YOU , LIKE THE DAWN SLIPPING INTO A NEW HORIZON, MAKING OUR WORLD THAT MUCH BETTER * WHILE THE FISH SWAM IN THE GURGLING RIVER WE FISHED SIDE BY SIDE, HEART OF VELVET SKIN OF HYDE TWO LOVERS LOSING THEMSELVES IN THE MOMENT WHEN THE SUN LOWERS DOWN FROM THE PAVILLION SKY REMEMBER HOW MUCH I LOVED YOU AND ALWAYS WILL WHEN THE NIGHT ARRIVES TO SIT ON YOUR WINDOW SILL REMEMBER TO THINK OF ME, AND BE STILL.

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Date: 5/28/2021 10:39:00 AM
MEMORIES ARE LOCKED IN YOUR HEART AND SOUL ROSE AND YOU ONLY HAVE THE KEY TO UNLOCK THEM AND REMINISCE - THIS POEM HAS TRUE LOVE MEMORIES, AWESOME POEM. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Date: 5/25/2021 8:44:00 AM
Hello MR - Your opening line sets the tone and voice of your entry. I very much enjoyed the quiet reflections which made the emotive factor shine and come through. Thank you for sharing. Enjoy poetry soup.
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Date: 5/24/2021 11:56:00 AM
Your poems are really fantastic.
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Date: 5/24/2021 6:57:00 AM
Oh, how delightfully romantic! Love shines in your verses, Vienna.
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Date: 5/24/2021 5:16:00 AM
A very romantic meditation, where feelings abound.
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Date: 5/24/2021 4:58:00 AM
Beautiful memories Rose, a very emotional write. But they live on in your heart and those cherished memories that you made together. Tom
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