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Remember Me, Silent One, 6/23/2026

Remember Me

Remember me, why
not; weary am I
in the process of
splinters, of fractures,
of the glass.
Like a Picasso,
I’m admired through
fractals. Remember
my kindness,
absentmindlessness,
my madness.

Yes, my madness,
when I
clean the house,
(You must not touch
my lips, nor feathers)
when I am furiously
flipping knives,
cutting pieces of me
in the dark.

Remember me,
I speak quietly,
(your ear is hot
to the touch, wet
with whispers,
pangs of pleasure.)

I have many voices,
so many choices,
my lot in life.
(Roulette wheel
deciding my future,
if I did not believe
in God)

But I do; remember
me for my imperfect
compassion, the cracks
in my heart, how
I explode. A firecracker
that makes you laugh,
tickles your funny bone,
keeps you breathless,
finds your keys.

Remember how I awaken
under your eyes,
especially when they’re shut.
We are in a storm,
sometimes the umbrella’s jammed,
upside-down, flying off, but
in the end it protects
who we are as man and wife.

Remember me, more
than a wife, mother, child;
remember a friend, a fractal,
a conceived idea, a hope
of the future.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:37 PM
touching words, heartfelt and sincere. Liked it. :-)
Crandall Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:10 PM
Expressive poetry! sometimes the umbrellas jammed -haha!
Hind Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 3:36 PM
moving- and I will always remember, you have a true gift
Rodrigues Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 6:34 PM
So sweet! Thank you, Paige!
DiMino Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 9:55 AM
A FAV! Great poetry!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 3:32 PM
Thank you for the fave, Joe!
Rolland Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 5:03 PM
so touching poem, i always enjoy your creativity, and inspiration, thanks
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 3:32 PM
I appreciate you, Yann! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 4:34 PM
Thank you, dear Kim. I think I'll remember always because you have a heart of gold. I like your poem very much. Best of luck.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, my sweet friend!
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 3:23 PM
Kim. I am going to send you a soupmail. Please see it right away. I need to get through to somebody that I am unable to send a soupmail to. I'll explain in soupmail
Gibbons Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 2:43 PM
I so enjoyed your remember me creation simply amazing. Touched every emotion , love way you write happy writing hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2026 at 3:28 PM
Thank you, Dorothy :)
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 12:48 PM
Creative work, maybe for a contest if so, it reads like a good contender for that contest to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 1:27 PM
Thank you, Sara!
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