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June- 23- 2026

Remember Me Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Silent One

Placed Seventh in the Premiere Poetry Contest


 

Remember Me

As the evening shadows grow longer As light beams ebb slowly down the West I sit by my desk with one eye tilted to the past The other straining into future, More conscious of change and time. As a pilgrim in the long road of life, I’m about to enter my journey’s end. When death comes to claim my life, I’ll bow in perfect acquiescence. Now a thought strikes me hard, That I should leave the door open, For you to enter my chamber to rummage And take possession of all my belongings. I don’t have much to offer in cash or kind- Just a few books of verse, which to me, More precious than all my belongings, Jotted down now and then Dipping the pen in my life blood Containing thoughts that whispered to me, In the enormity of my solitude, Where you’ll hear the faint beatings of my heart And remember me when I am gone. In perfect love and of free will I leave them behind, for you to take and read And remember me in my absence One last thing I wish you to do; Once death has claimed my life, Bury me all in white, With white blossoms covering my coffin And this, you carve on the grave where I sleep; “In this tomb, under the canopy of the sky Lies someone, though a small fry Had a heart as big as a mountain high Who with songs of love, every heart did tie” When after death, as I become a faded memory, And lie in a cemetery, where silence sleeps, Those who chance upon my grave, strangers though For a while, will remember me, As a humane soul who left a piece of her heart behind.
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Hind Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 9:25 PM
just beautiful, Valsa
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:22 PM
exquisite poetry in every line! Wow.
Brul Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:16 AM
What more can I say? This is so divine!!! ^___^ congratulations my friend.
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 11:32 AM
This is my fave, Valsa. Many of your words were really touching to me. You perfectly captured the essence of the subject. Congratulations on the win!
One Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 10:34 AM
Dear Valsa, I could feel the last breaths being taken away from the person in your poem.... You captured the essence of the prompt really well and there are some great lines like, "I don’t have much to offer in cash or kind- Just a few books of verse, which to me, More precious than all my belongings, Jotted down now and then Dipping the pen in my life blood." Many a poet would have the same last message.. Congratulations on your placement
George Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:27 PM
Thanks a lot dear Silent One for your beautiful and heart warming comment. Also thanks a lot for the high placement given. Stay happy.
Legros Kelley Avatar
June 25, 2026 at 8:31 AM
Oh Valsa, this is beautiful my precious dear friend. Don't you leave us anytime soon <3
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 6:30 AM
Quite an emotional write from your heart Valsa. As we get older we think about the end, hopefully not too soon. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 4:19 AM
An emotionally packed one for the contest, Valsa, which reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K. I put on my gravestone, a scripture reference, Song of Solomon 2: 11-13
Empress Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 2:32 AM
Ah what a deeply moving and honest poem this is dear sweet valsa! Your words flow so smoothly… It kind of stood out for me when you wrote that some books are your most valuable possession. Thats how I feel too. I cant say anything else means as much to me. so that resonated with me! The ending is so heart wrenching, so sincere and soulful! This is a poem that emanates such deep emotions and i think many can resonate too! Profound write! Pleasure reading your poem! Sending you light always!
Smith  Avatar
June 23, 2026 at 2:29 AM
Let's hope we leave something so we are remembered.
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