Remember Crying

Her lips were breathe taking
Her life not worth taking

Dying before I knew what love was
Holding her hand was such a love rush

Playing together on the playground
Living life by the beat of our sound

Staying up late holding each other
Not just a girlfriend, more like a lover

Being brought up, I was always nice
Broke into tears, when she lost her life

Her stepdad snapped acting crazy
He was fat, bald, and kinda lazy

Brought tears, beating her for hours at a time
But she maintained looking really fine

Exuberant fragrance from her body
Playing around with a hottie

On her last day it was sad
I got in an argument with her dad

He drove her to his old place
Then he shot her in the face

I found out and started to screamin'
Balled my fist up and battled demons

She was my only secret bliss
Not to mention my first kiss

She believed in all my hopes forever
Around her I felt lite as a feather

Emulating feelings from my heart
Broke down then began to start......crying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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July 20, 2010 at 12:33 AM
Wow great poem!!!!!! Love Dark Angel :]
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