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Remember Crying

Her lips were breathe taking Her life not worth taking Dying before I knew what love was Holding her hand was such a love rush Playing together on the playground Living life by the beat of our sound Staying up late holding each other Not just a girlfriend, more like a lover Being brought up, I was always nice Broke into tears, when she lost her life Her stepdad snapped acting crazy He was fat, bald, and kinda lazy Brought tears, beating her for hours at a time But she maintained looking really fine Exuberant fragrance from her body Playing around with a hottie On her last day it was sad I got in an argument with her dad He drove her to his old place Then he shot her in the face I found out and started to screamin' Balled my fist up and battled demons She was my only secret bliss Not to mention my first kiss She believed in all my hopes forever Around her I felt lite as a feather Emulating feelings from my heart Broke down then began to start......crying

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Date: 7/20/2010 12:33:00 AM
Wow great poem!!!!!! Love Dark Angel :]
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