Remember

“I can’t remember you, but you are pretty,” said the old man Tears formed in the eyes of the woman "Who are you?" His voice was the grayest of blues "Are you my new doctor? Or perhaps a nurse?" Silently, the woman took something out from her purse The photo was a wedding shot of a young pair His smile was dimpled and wide, and she had curly hair The woman handed the photo to the old man Setting it on his shaky hand He stared at it long and hard, trying to remember He looked at the date in the back—the 13th of December He looked at the woman in sudden surprise “Marianne!” He cried with joy. “Of course, my wife!” She left the room without another word That was the name of his first wife—and she was merely the third
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Sad and funny at the same time..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win with this very unique and creative work..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 5:51 PM
like the twist Laura congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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July 27, 2013 at 1:56 PM
Hi Laura,, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
Pritts Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 10:34 PM
This is a good write. I don't know if it comes from experience but it certainly exhibits some of the things that I went through with my mother. Thanks for sharing. Rockman.
Wesley Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 3:01 PM
Have to say Laura, the last two lines cracked me up. Too funny this conversation between these two old ones. Memories are sometimes hard to pin down I guess! :)
Minardi Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 12:25 PM
Laura this is very good. And the twisted end, somehow makes this witty :) Love your words, Laura!
Goller Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 10:02 AM
It is very sad when one loses his memory. I'm getting very forgetful..A well written story. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Kearley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 9:53 PM
Ohhhhh! I'm speachless...That would be so sad. :o( Nice write.
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