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“I can’t remember you, but you are pretty,” said the old man Tears formed in the eyes of the woman "Who are you?" His voice was the grayest of blues "Are you my new doctor? Or perhaps a nurse?" Silently, the woman took something out from her purse The photo was a wedding shot of a young pair His smile was dimpled and wide, and she had curly hair The woman handed the photo to the old man Setting it on his shaky hand He stared at it long and hard, trying to remember He looked at the date in the back—the 13th of December He looked at the woman in sudden surprise “Marianne!” He cried with joy. “Of course, my wife!” She left the room without another word That was the name of his first wife—and she was merely the third

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/30/2013 3:25:00 PM
Sad and funny at the same time..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win with this very unique and creative work..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
like the twist Laura congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:56:00 PM
Hi Laura,, congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
This is a good write. I don't know if it comes from experience but it certainly exhibits some of the things that I went through with my mother. Thanks for sharing. Rockman.
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Date: 5/10/2012 3:01:00 PM
Have to say Laura, the last two lines cracked me up. Too funny this conversation between these two old ones. Memories are sometimes hard to pin down I guess! :)
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Date: 5/5/2012 12:25:00 PM
Laura this is very good. And the twisted end, somehow makes this witty :) Love your words, Laura!
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Date: 5/5/2012 10:02:00 AM
It is very sad when one loses his memory. I'm getting very forgetful..A well written story. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:53:00 PM
Ohhhhh! I'm speachless...That would be so sad. :o( Nice write.
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