Remaining

All this pain that remains inside 
it just keeps filling and filling like a trash bin
but the trash never goes all the memories of the 
past.. I try to forget but when i see u all of it runs back
to my head !!! We live to different lives but are hearts remain
the same..

The more time goes by the closer you are 
life just seems to remain the same its like 
my life is so far from my hands its like i feel 
butterflies in my stomach!! The filling i feel is 
do magical!!

I cant take this no more its time to let go 4 heartless 
years you dont even care u look at me like u forgot the 
year we shared it felt like centuries but yet u remain
the same what should i do??

I believe its time to move on i cant hold this in cause u
remain the same i love at times but i hate u even more 
just let me forget i dont need this trash anymore!!!
Remain some where else i dont want u here!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/4/2010 2:56:00 PM
Great writing Marilyn! The hardest part is making up your mind to let him stay or go! Thank you for commenting on my poem. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2010 9:42:00 AM
Nice write. There's a thin line between love and hate.
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