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Remade

I'm walking alone down the road with no stone.People are here to try to make me feel at home. I see right through they are not people, they are demons in my heart keeping me evil. No one sees that i try to be me.I fight the good fight but it seems to hurt me. I don't know why i feel so low, but its time to get up and join a new show. Maybe ill join the ones less fortunate I hope I can lead them to rejoice it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/20/2011 7:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Patrick. Wishing you a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2011 5:31:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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