Religion

For me
religion must have a solemnity,
a heft like towering cliffs, places 
of silence and the majesty of sunsets. 
Religion must be big enough to hold
vast forests, extend beyond
the furthest galaxy and yet be small
enough to fit inside a seed.

For me
religion must have a veil of mystery
like clouds that conceal a mountain's 
height, like music that moves the soul
without the listener knowing why 
and the sublime in poetry.  
Religion must be kind and caring 
and contain something greater 
than the self. 

For me, 
religion must not divide
or promise life through exclusivity,
but be a way of making whole
and to give thanks for creation 
to whatever or whoever
you believe that to be.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 7:30 AM
Hello Paul, Incredibly thought-provoking and beautifully written. I love how you capture the duality of religion and its vastness and intimacy, the solemnity paired with a sense of mystery. Your perspective on inclusivity and wholeness in faith is refreshing and essential that spirituality should unite rather than divide. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel!
Willason Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Thankyou Daniel for your comments, as usual, crafted with that sharp mind of yours. Valued my friend,
Lawless Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 5:36 AM
AMEN...
Willason Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 6:53 PM
Your Amen is valued John...thankyou.
Lane Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 4:54 AM
I always savor reading your poetry, Paul. For me, religion was no longer a mystery when my seed of faith was large enough to believe in God and small only in that it fit inside my heart.
Willason Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 6:32 PM
Quite profound comments Lin...beautifully expressed. Always appreciate your visits, taking time to read the poems, knowing they are treated with kindness. A sincere thankyou dear Lin.
M  Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 4:14 AM
Exactly Paul l agree totally…..beautifully said my friend! ‘Religion must not divide and be kind and caring’ yes it should! Love ,love, oh and love this poem! Ha….Debx
Willason Avatar
March 25, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Good to get a thumbs up...always a sensitive subject because that's the way it has been, close to the bone, personal and set in quite immovable view points. I tend to see it as a constantly changing path, maturing as we grow. Cheers dear friend.
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