Relieving Tensions

So many packages, for no reason, I carry,
And walk burdened, my body and soul seem scary...
Tensions, I call them; nothing if I look within,
Just like an onion when I remove the whole skin...!

Any little word of my friends or neighbors, odd,
Any act for which I do not get their applaud,
Is enough for me to brood within long like fowls,
And lose my sleep and wake up many nights like owls...! 

So many foes, thus, in my life I had soon earned!
Full of pits in each step, thus, my life had upturned; 
None, like eyes before staring sun, I could not face,
Betwixt us, I could feel, forming an unknown space...!

Enemies and only enemies everywhere,
Shades of foes did shadow my soul and rudely glare;
Anger, fear, guilt, doubt, loneliness, and helplessness,
All, in their toughest chains, bound me in callousness...!

Having suffered, as though throat-choked, I decided,  
These pessimisms, like sun shades, are one-sided;
Optimism, with rainbow colors, when, fills the soul,
The world, with diversities, will turn single whole...! 

I unlocked my closed heart with keys of faith and hope,
Though coping with all seemed to tread on a tightrope;
I did not give up; a bit bloom of smile; a hug;
And felt, at last, each tension is a mere humbug...!!!


13 January 2023 
Revealing Your Soul And Other Tension Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/16/2023 8:19:00 AM
An excellent poem to express your life's challenges my dear friend Christuraj. I love and extremely enjoyed reading your creative write. The two last stanzas are great enlightenments. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Date: 1/15/2023 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Lasaad's contest. Great journey of an open confessions in your verse . Many Blessings My Friend
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/15/2023 7:43:00 AM
Open confessions of one who has been carrying a heavy load unnecessarily. If we give too much of importance to other people's opinions and remarks, we will never enjoy peace of mind. So face life as it comes and never allow resentments and bitterness rule our hearts. The right discernment at the end is so enlivening. Great poem. Congratulations on your great win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/15/2023 6:24:00 AM
BIG congrats on your podium win, Christuraj. Emotive rendering--well done.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/15/2023 10:12:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/14/2023 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations on the recognition received for your entry into the contest "Revealing Your Soul." I especially like the line, "I unlocked my closed heart with keys of faith + hope." Be well. Brian
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/14/2023 9:54:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 1/14/2023 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Life is full of hurt/pain. Enjoy the good days and let the bad ones go away. Ask, God for help to get over things. Have a blessed weekend...............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/14/2023 9:54:00 PM
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Date: 1/14/2023 10:41:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, It's hard for us to remember that we're all fragile and can break. Forgiving ourselves just must be the most difficult, I think. Congratulations on win!
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Date: 1/14/2023 9:54:00 PM
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Date: 1/14/2023 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with this fantastic poem, Alex. Blessings
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Date: 1/14/2023 9:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity. May God Bless You!
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