Relief Valve

Ate beans
BLEW jeans

Tim Ryerson
7/9/2015
Submitted For: Judy’s 'One Footle' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ober Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:30 AM
Hilarious!! A very colourful play on words haha
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Congrats on your win that made me smile at visualizing that happening!
Nance Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Hahaha get back he's gonna blow! Clever win
Callus Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Very funny, Tim!! Feel sorry for your blue jeans:) Congratulations!! // paul
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Congrats Tim.....big win
A   Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 1:54 AM
TIM, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR FOOTLE WIN........ LINDA
Wigley Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Now THAT'S a gas, Tim. Well done. Regards, Viv
A  Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 12:30 AM
Tim, you Andrea, Brian, are the best when it comes to footles... Love the way this form is hitting good on the soup. SKAT
Merryman Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Them beans are dangerous! Congrats on your fantastic win, Tim! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:37 PM
oh my!! Way to blow it, Footle king!! hahaha
Y. Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:15 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 5:12 PM
great one Tim - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Lawless Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 9:09 AM
was this footie written under pressure??? Love the word play.
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