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I don't mind if you climb inside This stump I left behind This lump of rot whose body parts Broke free of dotted lines Pluck a tooth, score a limb Scrawl a note or two In this lair of desert air There's room for both of you Odds and ends amidst the mud Insinuate a face A thin disguise free of love Cheeks the wind erased An alibi for skin and hair Where only dust resides Crumbled like an arid lie Free of human fear So grab some stringy gristle A brittle part will do Or a compact mass of bone and grass With the mellow scent of dew I don't mind if you grin or pout If you're whole or if you're broken Despite my rugged gutter mouth My door is always open Written by © Raven Drake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/17/2016 12:16:00 AM
Raven, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:26:00 PM
Raven Drake, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 11/7/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment Terry. I'm glad you enjoyed that one.
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Date: 10/24/2014 3:15:00 AM
This is a splendid work!!
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Raven Drake
Date: 10/24/2014 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Terry. I drew a lot of inspiration from the tragi-comic side of life when I was working on this one.

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