Reliable Truck

Mercedes greets Fridays with glee—
With girlfriends she drinks up a spree.
Boasts a dude in one bar,
“Though her name’s a fine car,
She’s merely a pickup to me.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Oh, that is really clever, David. ME LIKES.
Bose Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Thanks, Andrea. A little levity to launch my weekend--glad it brightened yours, too. Dave
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