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Release the Lyrics of Autumn

windex a clear day, emblazon the sun’s rays. off the clouds and its tears... warm my skin and brighten my hair.
release the clingstone of leaves —
let them lilt and explode in happily ever after, with the singsong of children and crisp rain of Autumn. 11/14/2018

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Date: 11/22/2018 4:23:00 PM
Well done, Kim. Congrats on your top win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thankyou, Line!
Date: 11/21/2018 10:03:00 PM
I am soaking up the imagery of autumn with a deep sigh Kim. This is beautiful! ; )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/22/2018 9:17:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/18/2018 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Kim!:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2018 1:53:00 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Date: 11/15/2018 4:19:00 PM
Lovely You really bring the vision of Autumn in all it's glory here. Well done. Beautiful expression. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2018 5:52:00 PM
God bless you too! Thank you, Judy!
Date: 11/15/2018 1:23:00 PM
'Windex a clear day' - simple perfection! Also love 'crisp rain of autumn' - glorious!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 11/14/2018 1:47:00 PM
--and I love the first (stanza)! You've eloquently captured the cozy, comfortable warmth of those sun's rays streaming through windows on cool/cold days. A winning wipe, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2018 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 11/14/2018 1:10:00 PM
Oh, this is really nice. I love the last stanza :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2018 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend!

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