Release Me Not

Release me not

Release me not from the charm
Of hearing your exclusive chriping
We met by chance
On an exclusive dawn
Under a velvet sky
Whilst the astonished sun
Peeped at us through its silky shadow

Let your melodious chirping 
Get merge with the vibrant wind
And compose an eternal symphony
In my solitary heart

Release me not from the story
Of your emotional heart
Let it breezes
On the tender petals of sping flowers
And mellowed autumn

Let a thousand dreams
Colour my fantasy
And let me fly unto you
On my flapping wings of poesy

Release me not 
Of hearing your exclusive chirping
In every dawn
In every dawn

~(c) Sukmawati Komala ~
Jan 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 1/7/2014 5:06:00 PM
only a person with alot of passion in their soul could write something so romantic and passionate very well done lady. great work here. cheri
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:38:00 AM
Thank you deary Cherl...appreciate so much.. i am delighted wiith your beautiful comments.. much love and light :)
Date: 1/4/2014 12:49:00 PM
Sukmawati a beautiful poem very well written, wonderful image……David
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Date: 1/6/2014 8:46:00 PM
thank you deary David.. such a blessing day to read your lovely comment (y) appreciate so much
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