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I've lost seemingly everything, what else can you take from me. All I have left is a few friends and my family. I tried so hard to tie these knots to make a unbreakable bind. But in the end a proper knot I am unable to find. Maybe instead of stitch I'll switch to brick to make the bond even stronger. Even then in time, if find I didn't use enough lime,and the bond doesn't hold any longer. So what do I use then, As I try to mend, my life that is all in pieces. This is getting old, got to be a way to break this hold,some way I can possibly release this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/10/2016 10:40:00 PM
Awesome poem that almost everyone can relate to.
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Joseph Bradshaw
Date: 11/10/2016 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Christy. I find your works very touching. Especially unlovable woman. I know I said that before. BUT I only say what I mean. Thanks for showing me kindness and honesty.

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