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Relaxing Rain

Candy corn rays of sunlight melt through the glass, where frosty ice-coated rills amass. Finger placed against the pane leaves a misty stain, when cold day's rain gently plays through emotion's strain, but glad as my feelings drain. I pour myself a glass of wine as candy corn rays of sunlight melt through the glass. 10/06/15 Andreree

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Skat A

Date: 10/21/2015 9:25:00 PM

James, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

James Inman
Date: 10/21/2015 10:52:00 PM

Thank you SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2015 9:09:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/17/2015 10:30:00 PM

Jan, Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 8:52:00 PM

ralph this is simply beautiful. Ahhhhh!! Congratulations on your win.

James Inman
Date: 10/17/2015 10:29:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, challenging contest. Thanks for hosting it.

Constance La France

Date: 10/7/2015 10:05:00 AM

James so beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, romantic ...

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thank you BW

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 7:29:00 AM

James this is delightful with wonderful imagery - it is a very challenging form !!!!- the first one I wrote took me 3 hours my one for this contest took considerably less - good luck:-)

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 8:29:00 AM

I agree Jan. My original poem was supposed to be about a lazy day in bed but my problems with matching the rhyme and syllable count completely reformed it. Thanks for the nice comment, and luck to you.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/7/2015 12:00:00 AM

Very well done, I like how you described the colors of sunlight. Good luck in the contest, James ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/7/2015 4:23:00 AM

That's sweet, but you are probably being overly critical of your own work. I did enjoy all the imagery very much. You poetically captured a moment ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 3:38:00 AM

Thanks CayCay, after rereading it now, it doesn't flow very well. I prefer yours.