Relaxing Beach

The beach of summer so hot and wonderful
Splashing in the ocean waves
The finding of shells and feet walking along the sand
Fulfilling our desire for more
Relaxing sun and sea breeze through our hair
Wonderful days of mornings, afternoon breezes
Makes us forget our troubles even if its only a little while
Sun, sand, breeze, cool relaxing ocean waves
Makes a wonderful postcard for sure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 10:07 PM
Despite the little bit of amphiboly in the third line (Are you finding feet? Are shells walking along the sand?), this is a decently descriptive submission describing something I personally enjoy. I live not too far from the New Jersey Shore.
Palmer Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 12:47 PM
sounds like you are in Jamaica,good for tourist,need someone to take the pictures for the postcard ,great write Laurel
Larison Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 1:10 PM
thanks so much. I have entered that in a contest too!
Andresen Avatar
June 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Send me a postcard Laurel. - My holiday next week .....hope for a lot sunshine and some splashing in the ocean waves!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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