Relaxed Day

the wind blowing
                                        the sunset fading
                                        sounds of crickets 
                                       lightin the chemistry
                                       sitting out on the lake underneath 
                                             that big oak tree
                                           nothing but the sound of nature
                                              throughtout my ears 
                                              fish jumpin in the water 
                                             my fishing pole casted out to catch me another 
                                              days worth of country home eatin.
                                              around my little fire i shall sit 
                                               tonights stars are totally blissed as in relaxed.
                                               moonlight shine bright its another world today .
                                                  gracefuly i lay down to look at the pink neon 
                                             sky thinking how great i found this place .
                                           stars shine....stars smile.... 
                                             im glazing at gods beautiful mysterious sky :)
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Boddie Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 7:09 PM
fishing always makes the day smoother....friends, family and plenty beer in the cooler....the only weapons brought are for those legless wonders....sticks and machetes for the snakes and hooks for the fish down under....relaxation like this is just so major....because of the undeniable Beauty that we call nature....Love your work ashley....;)
Rainwater Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 7:43 PM
thank you for commenting :) yea fishing is the best relaxation
Rainwater Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 1:37 PM
thank you
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