Relaxed Day

Cobalt blue waters
Dark gray clouds filtered sun light
Light ocean breezes

Hammock between trees
Seagulls flying over head
Pelaquins in line

Totally relax
Enjoy peaceful existence
Birds even at peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 31, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Excellent 3 tier Haiku Sara, so lovely to read, Soup Mail for you>>James
Ahearn Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 5:57 PM
Your poem form is (multiple) Haiku. The body of your poems conform to the title. Nice work!
Doggett Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 5:25 PM
This appears to be a list, Good idea, Bill
Goff Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 1:29 PM
this poem sways like a peaceful hammock! delightful! Sara! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo
Justice Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 12:42 PM
This is just beautiful. Your work is very good, thanks ofr the lovely comment, Sara. Peace out, Levi
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