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Relaxed Day

Cobalt blue waters Dark gray clouds filtered sun light Light ocean breezes Hammock between trees Seagulls flying over head Pelaquins in line Totally relax Enjoy peaceful existence Birds even at peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/31/2009 1:34:00 PM
Excellent 3 tier Haiku Sara, so lovely to read, Soup Mail for you>>James
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Date: 7/26/2009 5:57:00 PM
Your poem form is (multiple) Haiku. The body of your poems conform to the title. Nice work!
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Date: 7/25/2009 5:25:00 PM
This appears to be a list, Good idea, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2009 1:29:00 PM
this poem sways like a peaceful hammock! delightful! Sara! and thanks for your welcome comments! jimbo
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Date: 7/25/2009 12:42:00 PM
This is just beautiful. Your work is very good, thanks ofr the lovely comment, Sara. Peace out, Levi
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