Relatives

Relatives just visited that I haven't seen for a while Actually wasn't too impressed, they have a different style Sense of humour was strange My patience was drained Wanted these retards to take leave of our domicile

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2017 10:43:00 AM

Such a great poem my wonderful colleague. Your consistency in thoughts, creativity and producing excellent poetry is worth emulating and admiring. Keep on giving us 7 pointers.

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/16/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thank you kind sir! Your visit was very much appreciated! Cheers, Jack

Barry Stebbings

Date: 5/15/2017 7:54:00 AM

Yes, Jack. I know how you feel!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/15/2017 8:39:00 AM

Why is it so, I ask??? Oh well, they DID go back to their cave!!! YEE HAW!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 5/15/2017 7:52:00 AM

I've got some like that — hall of fame//(of course they classify me as — hall of shame;-)//best apart//do not start//on who in the family tree's to blame! GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/15/2017 8:43:00 AM

Think some of them fell outta the family tree and landed on their heads!!! Phew! I "love" them but I love them more when they leave!!! GOOD MORNING SIR JOHN JOHN!!!