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Relationship Tableau

There’re many roses In my house garden But I feel my rose, the one I’ve watered Is more important Than all the roses
+++ October 17, 2014 Form : Tableau Dr. Ram Mehta Fourth Place Win Contest: Design your Tableau by nette onclaud I have chosen; 1.“You become responsible forever for what you’ve tamed.” **Taming meaning to create a relationship** ============================================== The following stanzas are not for the contest: If you tame someone You’ll need each other You’re only for her And she’s but for you. You’re responsible For relationship. Liability comes from a sense of mutuality Makes life livable. The giver gets back a sense of purpose ============================
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Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:20 PM
very nice. And it is the same as in the story the quote comes from. it's a rose that he tames, right? Congrats in the contest.
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Excellent tableau Dr! Roses are all beautiful, but nothing beats a human rose that you share your life with. Congrats on your merited win. // paul
Haight Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 3:53 PM
Dr. Ram, such a wonderful winning tableau for the contest, and I also enjoyed the other two. Great meaningful, sensitive words to support "taming to create a relationship." Congratulations! Sandra
Gorelick Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:53 AM
Everyone would wish for this kind of relationship. Congrats to you and you rose. BG
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 7:36 AM
- There are many that I have read before .... and many who not arrived at the winners list .... but, everyone can not win! - Really hard to judge .... (glad it's not me :) - In my eyes, everyone is so beautiful written! - CONGRATULATIONS !!! - Have a restful and lovely weekend,Dr. Ram - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 4:32 AM
This is a marvelous Tableau. Congratulations on your win.
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 6:15 PM
Well done, Dr. Congratulations. Joyce
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta. I love your beautiful Tableau and your nice notes showing words of wisdom.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2014 at 4:02 PM
wonderful relationship Tableau Dr Mehta - i did comment on this write a few days ago but for some reason my comments didn't show. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
October 19, 2014 at 4:45 AM
Creative entry..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for your recent visit to my blog..I am sorry that I am so long in personally saying thanks but it has been kind of hard getting everything done in little spurts..I feel like the last three days that I am actually getting over the surgery, etc..Sara
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 8:48 AM
- Lovely Relationship Tableau, Dr. Ram - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Yes it is, Priyanka in full glory Love Mehtassab.
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