Edward Ebbs Poet Tanka

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Relationship Breakups

A hole in my heart
There is no death with this pain
Life with no living
The stomach cramps with sorrow
Hope lost with only darkness

Edward J Ebbs 


Written for a Contest, "Relationship Breakups"

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 13, 2011 at 10:28 AM Congratulations on your win Ed. Sorry to be late on comment. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich October 9, 2011 at 1:56 AM Congratulations on your win. I really like how you did yours, Ed

Poet Destroyer A October 9, 2011 at 12:47 AM ED, CONGRATULATIONS ;-) ~ IN Russell Sivey, CONTEST.. GREAT ENTRY,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Lori Lucas Mcclure October 8, 2011 at 2:43 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!

Wilma Neels October 8, 2011 at 2:37 PM Edward, congratulations on your win in Russell's contest ;) Wilma