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Relationship and Beyond

At 23 Lubb dubb call
Thought it won't happen at all
Dreamed big & it started as fantasy
Ended up left out, hurt & unhappy

It started as an invite for coffee
& ended as i wanna set you free
We met when it was dark
We ended not feeling the spark

He is a good hearted person
Other issue led to other reason
Waiting isn't just a solution
When there's one way attraction

My first is a failure
Hoping for a heart cure
Seeing his face is my weakness
But I just cant live in forever darkness

Decisions were made
Cause love didn't fade
Even for a month we disliked each other
We love & care, we still wanna be together

It was an uneasy choice to depend on
But worth the fight for genuine affection
Minutes, hours & day passed by
Scared to hear final goodbye

I really really love you mahal with all my heart
But i'll just stick with friends so we don't part
Weeks, months & now a year
Time passed & i'm left with dried tear

Where is my love, Where is my love?
In his new journey he flew like a dove
Ended up not having my future partner
But as promised we'll be friends forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2014 9:22:00 AM
Liezel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I look forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care, Enjoy the Christmas Holidays! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:11:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Liezel - I choose your first touching and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2014 5:54:00 PM
I know what it's like to go through this... keep writing poetry and you will feel better, in my opinion. Happy Holidays, Lauren
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