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Rejection

They didn't want Jesus Christ for their king,
     being meek was an utterly detestable thing
They didn't want Him for their king,
     what conquering tales could this man bring
They wanted a fierce one like Julius and Alexander,
     men who were lecherous and loved to pander
They didn't want a king who was pure and angelic,
     they wanted a king who brought back bloody relics
They wanted a king who sung tavern songs,
     and endorsed riotous living for living long
They didn't like the way He made His disciples walk,
     and how His miracles made sinners give pause and balk
They didn't like to hear the goodly words He spoke,
     and how He was surrounded by poor and simple folk
What kind of army was this they scornfully wondered,
     that didn't lie or steal, that didn't kill nor plunder
No, this man was worthy of a Pilate rejection,
     He with the flinty face of godly perfection
For on His cross it said, "He was the King of the Jews"
     but the unbelievers said He wasn't the king they did choose
Don't be like Judas: who for money made a sell-out decision,
     and got rejected from being part of the righteous twelve
Those paid to spread the lie that Jesus Christ had not risen
     have a very special place reserved for them in hell

Copyright © Freddie Robinson Jr. | Year Posted 2016

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Harry Horsman Date: 5/17/2021 8:10:00 AM Like some of those below i too love to visit first post, and not disappointed either, such strength there is here in this poem of yours, words of the betrayal. And there are many today going down the same road... Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 11/17/2017 7:54:00 PM Freddie, I came to see your first post on PS and I was amazed with your powerful and impassioned poem. Your declaration in your faith is loud and clear, beautifully expressed and a enthralling pleasure to read. Shining poetry my friend! Hugs and smiles!! Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/29/2017 10:27:00 PM This is good, I took one of my girlfriends to see Passion Of The Christ. She cried most of the film. She asks: did they really do all that to him? I think her life was changed a bit that day :). Thank you for reading my first poem "Fall From Grace" That's why I went to your first :) Login to Reply

Doug Vinson Date: 2/26/2017 11:20:00 PM Turned back the PoetrySoup pages to see where you began here, my friend. Some righteous poetry! Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 2/27/2017 10:37:00 AM Ty, Doug. I really do appreciate you reading my debut poem for Poetry Soup. I knew out of my large collection of poems, which one was going to be posted first. "Rejection" reflects me and my core beliefs totally. I want this to be how Soupers see me through the prism of my faith. Jesus Christ Rocks! Love you, brother.

Joseph May Date: 1/18/2017 4:22:00 PM He was brought before them like a lamb to slaughter... Powerful write Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/18/2017 4:48:00 PM Ty, Joseph for going back to the beginning. This poem reflects all that I believe. The cornerstone of my faith is Jesus Christ plus nothing. Love your interest and kind comments. Please feel free to stop by anytime. Love and peace to you.

Alexis Y. Date: 10/29/2016 5:34:00 PM Hi Freddie, I decided to go check out your debut poem on poetry soup. I'm not suprised that its a poem reflecting your strong faith in God. If they really knew who they were "rejecting" they would have made another choice. This piece makes me think about the words Jesus spoke on the cross" Forgive Them Father For They Know Not What They Do". I enjoyed reading this powerful and impactful write:-) Alexis PS. I would say welcome but I think I've already have welcomed you here by embracing you and your art. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/30/2016 4:31:00 AM Yes you have, Alexis. You know all too well already. As I was combing thru my catalog of poems trying to decide which would be my first few poems to offer to PSoup readers, the first one was never in doubt. I was gonna declare who and what I am and what I believe. Jesus Christ front center. Ty for the kind words and much love to you. RW

Paul Callus Date: 10/19/2016 4:47:00 PM This is quite an impactful poem, Freddie. Shows why this world can never be at peace with itself, since so many reject what is right. A very good poem indeed. Regards // paul Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/22/2016 11:01:00 AM Ty, Paul. Such a loving comment coming from such an accomplished poet makes my day, friend. Stay blessed. Love you always.

Steven Henderson Date: 10/12/2016 4:29:00 AM Freddie, you said, something early about someone being smarter than you. I know better! Peace and many blessings my friend. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/22/2016 11:00:00 AM Aw, Illustrious One, you're making an old lion smile. Ty for the beautifully kind words. Love you, my main man.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/8/2016 7:19:00 PM and yes you got the meaning of a Loving Son perfectly. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/22/2016 10:58:00 AM Amen, sister! Love you always.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/8/2016 7:18:00 PM Now that is a GREAT poem, Freddie!! Also I join with Skat and PD here to give you a big welcome to PoetrySoup. Hope to see more of your poems in time. Right now I am on a mad dash to catch up with comments from two days ago until now!! Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/22/2016 10:58:00 AM Ty, Andrea. When I first arrived at PSoup, I knew this would be the first poem out of my vast collection I would post. To show my love of the Lord to everyone here. Ty for welcoming me w/such love and praise, it all goes to God. Much love and peace to you.

Skat A Date: 10/4/2016 7:53:00 PM Freddie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/1/2016 10:21:00 PM Freddie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/5/2016 8:28:00 PM Ty for the gracious welcome, PD. As a show of my appreciation for your beautiful gesture, I wrote an impromptu Clerihew titled, "This Clerihew's For You." My pseudonym is Romantic Warrior. I raise thought-provoking issues thru humor, satire and in-your-face truth telling. I'm a free thinker who loves to play w/words. Love you and all the other poets. Love and peace. Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 10/3/2016 11:32:00 PM Ty for the gracious welcome, Linda. I'm a free-thinker type of poet. I love to raise thought provoking issues thru humor, satire and in-your-face truth telling. I am a conscientious objector to pretentious, self-absorbed swill. My pen strikes true, even if the object of displeasure is myself. I am a Christian romantic warrior. Much love to you and yours.