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First Place
Brain Strand's contest: A Form or Free

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I lie
Before you....
An open book...
You close the cover
Not wanting
To read...
A single page...
Of
who 
I am

~~~~

childhoodlyric

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Lee Ramage

July 30, 2011 at 7:14 PM

Hi Elaine, congratulations, I have no idea how I missed this whole results posting of this contest. Well done. Lee

Nette Onclaud

July 21, 2011 at 1:26 PM

a daunting piece.. a round of congrats on your greatttt win, elaine!:) huggs

Joyce Johnson

July 21, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Very sad Elaine but congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Emma Mantle

July 21, 2011 at 9:14 AM

So well summed up. Congrats on your win. Best wishes Em :)

John Freeman

July 21, 2011 at 9:03 AM

Elaine, Great entry for a top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

July 21, 2011 at 7:10 AM

Simply said, and holds intense emotion. You have done it again, dear Elaine! Congrats!

Wilma Neels

July 21, 2011 at 6:40 AM

This is beautiful Lainie!! Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest :) lfde Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 21, 2011 at 6:20 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Lainie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 21, 2011 at 6:11 AM

Congrats Lainie on another exciting win with this tremendous relaying of emotions my friend.. u need to publish these rare beauties in a book .. each time I read one ...there is another even more lovely..as this tender one..luv..

Jonathon Paarlberg

August 10, 2008 at 7:40 PM

Whew! 'Hits me hard, that does.

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