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REHEARSAL

REHEARSAL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my mind, a ballet dancer, my thoughts in constant rehearsal. each idea is poised at the barre of consciousness, leg extended, muscles trembling. some are fouettés, sharp and quick, a flurry of solutions, a staccato burst of inspiration, others, adagio, slow and deliberate, a sustained arabesque of contemplation, held by the strength of quiet observation. there are moments of stillness, too, a gentle plié, a pause in the music, a chance to gather strength before the next grand jeté.
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Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:29 PM
lovely use of ballet terminology ~ well done, Sara
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:58 PM
thank you. I have my aunt to thank for the ballet terminology....enjoy your evening, Sara
Williams Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Dear Sara, this is exquisite — the way you mirror the movements of dance with the flow of thought feels so fluid and elegant. Each line reads like a choreography of the mind, full of beauty, balance, and poise. Hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:59 PM
thank you, dear Maria, for your eloquent comments. Your words mean a great deal to me so I'm humbly appreciative. Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
DiMino Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:26 AM
Ballet, wonderful and captivating to watch. No wonder, its seems spiritual to those who practice the art. Great writing! You get a FAV! from me.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 5:00 PM
my aunt was a ballerina...she was captivating to watch. I agree, dance was spiritual for her; it allowed her to connect to something beyond her body...truly beautiful. Thank you for your enthusiasm and for the fave...I'm most grateful, Sara
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