Regretting Cake

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Regretting Cake Look at the damage a loose cake does! Vanilla with strawberry icing it was. Smacked me in my lips. Attacked my hips. Took complete control. Dog gone, a new roll. 8/4/16

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Anna M Shepard

Date: 10/2/2021 1:02:00 PM

Nice. I just had to giggle to myself. Have a blessed day.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 9/27/2021 10:13:00 AM

Ha ha Janice: Cake affects me the very same way…..coconut it was. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 6:28:00 PM

this is lip smacking FANTASTIC. In case I don't see it on her winner list, you let me know!!

Julia Ward
Date: 5/8/2023 12:51:00 PM

"Julia's winner list", not "her".

Janis Thompson
Date: 8/4/2016 8:51:00 PM

Thanks, you never know.......