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Regrets

Regrets They follow you like vultures soaring in wistful circles alighting on church roofs at weddings and christenings, never out of your sight and chew on your dreams. Their shadows mark the good things that could have been yours and spatter your life with the droppings of what ifs and maybes. Your past is inaudible over their constant chatter, and when you lie still, fading, with your family looking on, they perch at the foot of your bed and laugh

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Date: 7/9/2016 3:16:00 PM
For myself, I regret my marraige. For my children, never. Don't intend to have any more Viv. Regrets that is.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/10/2016 12:22:00 AM
Way to go, lass, what a great attitude . Men, eh? Huh. Oh, hang on a minute......... x
Date: 7/8/2016 10:55:00 PM
You wrote the hard hitting truth about the way of regrets. They are one reason God wants us to let go of yesterday, but they come and sneer in the dark or sad hour. This write should relate to all. CayCay
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:23:00 AM
Thanks, CayCay, someone once said you can't drive a car staring at the rear view mirror all the time.... x
Date: 7/8/2016 9:33:00 AM
Really great write Viv! Once knew a lovely young lady many years ago who told me she had no regrets in her life. At first I thought , "How wonderful, I wish I could say that;" until, I came to the realization that she was either not truly living life or more likely she wasn't being honest with herself.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/8/2016 2:42:00 PM
No regrets? Sounds like she was a robot, methinks. Regards, Viv
Date: 7/8/2016 8:54:00 AM
Comparing regrets to vultures...cleverly written, Viv!! I suppose we all have a regret or two in life...even Frank Sinatra did! // paul
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Date: 7/8/2016 2:43:00 PM
Yes, he had a few.... but then again...too few to mention...oh, no, I'm going into Karaoke mode ! Aaaargh!

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