Regrets

The candle flickers and shadows dance against the wall..
Watching, mesmerized, dreaming of my own dance so long ago.
I swirled round and round, my feet so light upon the floor..
My skirt wound round my legs, my head upon his chest..
Life was full of possibilities then, joy in every turn.

Now the candle sputters, darkness settles once again..
My dance is over; its season has come and gone.
The poems that were written then have burned to ash..
Unheard the many songs I thought to sing..
Left now only the dream of that dance so long ago.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Swanson Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 2:45 PM
Really beautiful and poetic Barbara, you are a wonderful writer. It touched my heart. God bless, Amy :)
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December 18, 2008 at 2:02 PM
I think this is one of the best poems I have read by you, Barbara. The flow, the emotion, and the descriptive imagery are all wonderful. Really loved it. Love, Nigel
Baker Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 1:47 PM
This seems to be a very sentimental piece. It flows very nicely together. Great job!
Higgins Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 11:46 AM
Well written poem that allows the voice in the piece to wear her heart on her sleeves. This poem reads very strong..the second stanza first line is wonderful..thanks for sharing this write.
Reynolds Avatar
December 18, 2008 at 3:20 AM
Ah, regret. This paints a very sad, and vivid picture, well done, love, Kristin
Esquire Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 10:30 PM
Dear Barbara, This POEM saddens me I feel the loss of YOUR past I shall take this POEM to bed with me in hope to revive it in my dreams Maybe we will be dancing in the dawn's flickering Light Good Night Barb ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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December 17, 2008 at 10:19 PM
Joy, then sadness... 'flickers/sputters.' Vivid imagery and marvelous word choices. Well done Barbara! Best wishes, Keith
Moreno Avatar
December 17, 2008 at 8:51 PM
Nice poem Barbara, the metaphors layered with the imagery makes for a well written poem.
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