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Regretfulness

strings of my heart pulled tight close to fracture seduced, captivated thoughts, memories unable to control hearts contracture start to examine minds directories, regrets flowing through souls blocked arteries underestimated your great power her loveable virtues abilities didn't stop my evil need to deflower, darkness falls yet energises resolve to prove intentions was benevolent demonstrate needs for our love to evolve convince my actions weren't malevolent now I crave your undying forgiveness without you, life's pitiful, no richness. 7/22/2018

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/23/2018 9:54:00 AM

Smoothly, well written Roy! :)

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, you’re too kind my dear friend. :))

Lyric Man

Date: 7/22/2018 11:46:00 PM

Roy, really enoyed your Regretfulness sonnet!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 4:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man, your support is really appreciated my friend. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/22/2018 1:52:00 PM

Lovely sonnet Roy, good luck, its a lovely form, I was wary at first but now enjoy doing them,soup is such a great place to learn without a doubt. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 7/22/2018 2:54:00 PM

Thanks Tom, I agree sonnets are a joy to read and there are amazing poets on soap that are masters of the form, thanks again for your support and best wishes much appreciated. :))