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Regretfulness

strings of my heart pulled tight close to fracture 
seduced, captivated thoughts, memories 
unable to control hearts contracture 
start to examine minds directories, 

regrets flowing through souls blocked arteries 
underestimated your great power
her loveable virtues abilities 
didn't stop my evil need to deflower,

darkness falls yet energises resolve
to prove intentions was benevolent 
demonstrate needs for our love to evolve
convince my actions weren't malevolent 

now I crave your undying forgiveness 
without you, life's pitiful, no richness.

7/22/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/23/2018 9:54:00 AM
Smoothly, well written Roy! :)
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 3:01:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, you’re too kind my dear friend. :))
Date: 7/22/2018 11:46:00 PM
Roy, really enoyed your Regretfulness sonnet!
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Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Lyric Man, your support is really appreciated my friend. :))
Date: 7/22/2018 1:52:00 PM
Lovely sonnet Roy, good luck, its a lovely form, I was wary at first but now enjoy doing them,soup is such a great place to learn without a doubt. Tom
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Date: 7/22/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I agree sonnets are a joy to read and there are amazing poets on soap that are masters of the form, thanks again for your support and best wishes much appreciated. :))

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